Continuation of Jay and Carly... Direction?
Added 2020-05-06 18:39:10 +0000 UTCI've been giving a lot of thought to how and in what direction I want to continue the Carly / Jay story. My reluctance to continue focusing on them is that the story isn't really building to any particularly interesting point any more. That is fine to some degree. "Slice of life erotica" is perfectly valid IMO. It just runs a real risk of becoming "samey".
That being said, there's two other potential ways to go. Continue with Carly's side of the story (particularly since we're entering into the part of the story that more focused on Jay so you'd get to learn more about other things that happened during that time that happened off screen).
Alternatively, I had a bit of inspiration last night. What if I did a time jump ~20 years in the future and a story focused on Jay and Carly's kids and their half-siblings. Jay's son starting his own little harem beginning with his sister and half-siblings?
So where should I spend my energy?
Comments
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lwus2nqU0SY is one, there're others
J B
2020-05-06 21:22:18 +0000 UTCThere's lots of interesting options to make their lives interesting. A fundamentalist learns of their lifestyle and makes life interesting. A lothario learns and gets butthurt that Jay's got more women. A Domme is offended by Carly's choices, or Jay's, or one of the others'. Don't know what the legal issue(s) would be with Florida (polygamy?), but a lawman/DA/state cop of some sort might feel compelled to butt in. Etc.
J B
2020-05-06 21:21:41 +0000 UTCThat's the bunny, and YouTube has video of it. Also works both sun up and sun down in the keys - no land visible west or East is the key, just ocean.
J B
2020-05-06 21:13:37 +0000 UTCI want to see life post-Carly giving birth to Baby #1, and Jay knocking up whoever is next in line to put a baby in, especially if he forces Carly to be the one to choose which of his women gets to be Baby Mama #2. Granted, it would probably be Krysten, but there are other fun options. I would also especially love to see the eventual blossoming of Max and Starla's relationship, and maybe a revelation that Max is more like Jay than we previously thought, and only needed the love of a kinky girl to inspire him to become like Jay. Maybe Max succeeds where Jay failed and snags the Indian girl who is Starla's RA?
MisterSunshine1029
2020-05-06 19:50:51 +0000 UTCA possible idea for an overarching idea could be either something as someone is coming after Jay or Carly wanting to steal one of them away and trying to figure out who is doing it. Or it could be something past related like some kind of action comes back to haunt them. A last ditch options is going sci-fi or fantasy theme event or action XD
Wolfwriter
2020-05-06 19:41:16 +0000 UTCMaybe I'm going to reveal my stupidity but what's the "Green Flash"? There's a west coast optical phenomenon (that actually sounds quite beautiful) but i can't find anything else relevant.
2020-05-06 19:32:29 +0000 UTCNote - I really enjoyed Carly's side of the story too, but the main storyline IMO has much, much more available.
J B
2020-05-06 19:30:12 +0000 UTC"Into every life both laughter and tears shall come." What happens next? How do they handle (or don't handle!) it? Who gets closer and who falls away? What new challenges show up? How do Jay and Carly come to an agreement about adding more to the harem - and how busy is Jay with the harem? What are Jay & Carly & the rest of the harem going to do for jobs? What interesting new people will they meet? Which of them is the first to see the 'green flash'? Who do they scandalize next? Who next can't stay away, and who next HAS to stay away? Soooooo many questions.... :D
J B
2020-05-06 19:28:48 +0000 UTCAgreed. Finishing the honeymoon as slice of life, the move and settling, periodic visits from those that couldn't move their whole lives all sound great, the redemption of the ex-gf as a member of his family. Filling in Carly's side where it makes sense.
BlissfulDarkness
2020-05-06 19:26:03 +0000 UTC
