Feedback
Added 2025-03-21 21:56:36 +0000 UTCSo I wanted to gauge some feedback amongst my patrons, particularly about the artwork side of things, I’m going to go a bit more in depth than my questions on my other socials since yall are paying me for this.
What do you like about my artwork beyond the style? What do you think could be improved?
Are you consistently engaged with the characters and their interactions/relationships with each other?
Do you like certain universe sections (Like Titan-Sized Starfire) and want to see more like that? Are there any AUs you wish to see return?
Do you enjoy the scenarios the characters have in my pictures and stories?
Does the kink aspect of the work, beyond just being a certain size, satisfy you?
Keep in mind that I don’t believe any sort of response would lead to a total 180 degree in the direction of my work, however I do want more feedback from you all.
Thank you for participating in this if you partake.
Comments
Perhaps over time draw up model sheets of fat women with different builds and apply that to your art. Like bottom heavy, belly heavy, fat all over, super busty and at different levels of fatness. Then apply these builds to your art over time. I don't ask you draw such sheets immediately, rather do them over time and apply the builds over time
hypershock18
2025-03-23 21:20:06 +0000 UTCI threw out sumo, nurses, etc. Just to have themes and vary stuff up.
hypershock18
2025-03-22 21:26:16 +0000 UTCWouldn't say to just do bustier women, but also bottom/fat all over builds. Maybe vary bustiness to distinguish women.
hypershock18
2025-03-22 16:25:08 +0000 UTCI need to get the appeal of boobs being bigger than most of the body first which….probably isn’t gonna happen. But I guess I could try?
Plus-Stars
2025-03-22 05:25:02 +0000 UTCOmg I 100% agree, I love PS' style but seeing some top heavy+bottom heavy figures would be nice
Hazard97
2025-03-22 04:43:30 +0000 UTCSame and didn't know if to accentuate cleavage, butts if that makes you uncomfortable, then to focus on distinguishing builds like belly heavy, bottom heavy, super busty, fat all over builds. As well as trying different stuff like sumo, nurses, diner waitresses, fantasy characters, etc. As well as trying characters from different franchises.
hypershock18
2025-03-22 03:02:22 +0000 UTCThe only thing I think could be improved upon is a lot characters have quite similar body types and proportions so maybe you could mix things up a bit more in the future. Otherwise excellent work.
Joel
2025-03-22 01:24:13 +0000 UTCI’m a sucker for alternate universe stuff so I say keep that coming. Probably the only thing I’d bring up is some of your face designs look a little similar but that seems to be diversifying recently All in all great stuff
GeomancerMagus
2025-03-22 00:55:02 +0000 UTCThe biggest thing I always appreciate about both your art and the written stuff you do (which is great and always a pleasure) is that it’s obvious that you not only have a deep knowledge of the source material that you tackle, but also a deep respect for it and the characters within it. Too often are works in this community just completely dismissive of the characters they’re drawing but that’s never the case with your stuff, and that’s greatly appreciated. As for areas of improvement, I’m not an artist, but another thing to appreciate about you is that you’re constantly improving, even just comparing work from a couple months ago to now you can see a difference, and it’s awesome! You’ve come such a long way and I’m looking forward to seeing what else you’ve got in store in the future! All of your AU’s rock and I really love them all! The coolest thing about all these AU’s are seeing stories and characters that go beyond just a one-shot drawing and they all rock! Very excited for the future stuff you have in the works, and definitely hyped for the next adventures of all these awesome characters (you’ve seriously gotta work in Tubby Titans, Plus-Stars, and At Large into the future crossovers cause they’re so cool lol). I feel like I’ve already made it clear I’m a big fan of your stories and scenarios with the characters lol, and again the big future stuff you have in the works all sound amazing. As for the kink aspect I think you handle it really well! Again the thing that sets you apart is how respectful you are to the characters, which is one of the most important things for me personally lol. I really didn’t mean to go on as long as I did, but I hope the feedback is useful and it kinda goes without saying but keep up the incredible work!
John Smith
2025-03-22 00:21:43 +0000 UTCBecause it’s hot it’s sexy and it’s really cool. Plus I’ve always been into the alternate universe type stuff and this doesn’t come as a surprise to me so your heart is really cool and very imaginative.
Julian Reight
2025-03-21 23:03:37 +0000 UTCI think you have a strong grasp on expression and posing. I think you can improve on smaller details, hands, and feet. You could also experiment more with different body shapes. But I have noticed you improving in these areas anyway so I guess just keep doing what you are doing.
Scott Fine
2025-03-21 22:41:34 +0000 UTCI follow you because I really like the cuteness of your art style. I am a sucker for cute, wholesome romance. I am not as engaged with the characters since we don’t share the same favorite characters, but I do like whenever you do MJ and the Avengers characters. I like the scenarios that are sweet and/or comedic. I’m not interested in kinks. Keep heading the course you are going
Dio Halen
2025-03-21 22:29:29 +0000 UTCI'd be interested in seeing your take on other franchises like anime, manga and video games.
Max Johnson
2025-03-21 22:22:06 +0000 UTC
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