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Unexpected pg 4 Sketch

HEY! :D I'm back! I've been chomping at the bit to get this page going. I've finally moved in to my new digs and got my setup working again so there shouldn't be another dry spell of content. I'd like some feedback with this page if you would. I want to make sure the page reads correctly. Let me know in the comments if anyone gets hung up reading through it!

Unexpected pg 4 Sketch

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No issues at all about the panel. Just a suggestion about the following works: if this chapter is going to be very story-oriented, then you should consider to alternate it with some other work with "a bit rawr"... for example, coloring chapter 1, or even starting Cycles 5 maybe ;).

Zockereinstein

It looks fine to me, readability wise

Spotts1701

"Hi Mer? I can't make it it today. Looks like I picked up a bad case of lycanthropy. Rarr, snarl, grrr. I should be in tomorrow."

Kerlem

Calling out sick to work I see

Magic Man


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