Untitled Fantasy Game Demo Story Chapter 1
Added 2020-03-02 16:02:53 +0000 UTCHey guys!
I'm here and I'd like some feedback on a potential Story for the first chapter of the new fantasy game.
After you've finished reading through it, please let me know your comments below and answer this poll question: Did you think it was good or it sucked ass?
I've attached the text file in this poll, so you can just download the attachment and read it.
I'll ask Sharkie to run through this and get his opinion as well.
The story strictly covers chapter 1 (which is kinda dark in itself). In chapter 2 and onwards, things are supposed to get sexier and lighter.
