English ver.(DAY 1 - DAY 4)
Added 2022-05-25 03:44:06 +0000 UTC"Sober big-breasted Glasses-chan who has sex with her dog after 100 days." Thanks for all your support! I have decided to translate the story of Megane-chan and Lucky into English. I will upload them here from the page where I have finished the English adaptation.
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I dunno if I can read again the last couple of scenes when Lucky is dying of old age, it hurts too much.
admiraltolokus
2022-10-26 07:14:40 +0000 UTCThank you. It helps a lot. I will use this advice on the production version!
Lithium
2022-05-27 02:46:52 +0000 UTCCool! Do you want your Fanbox followers to point out any errors we find in the script so you can clean it up before you put it out for sale eventually? I can spot 2 minor errors in day 3. titss -> tits inthis -> in this And for day 4, last panel, I think "He probably thinks of me as an awkward girl" probably is a better sentence. Or maybe "He probably thinks I'm a weird girl". I'm happy to give this kind of feedback if you want it. ^_^
cosmo
2022-05-26 20:19:27 +0000 UTCThank you for saying so!
Lithium
2022-05-26 10:50:09 +0000 UTCI'll do my best:)
Lithium
2022-05-26 10:49:52 +0000 UTCThank you too:)
Lithium
2022-05-26 10:49:21 +0000 UTCThanks too!!
Lithium
2022-05-26 10:49:10 +0000 UTCThank you:) Yes, I'm planning to sell the English version in DLsite.
Lithium
2022-05-26 10:48:54 +0000 UTCHey, if you need help with spell-checking and writing better English I would gladly help (for free of course). I don't know Japanese but I know English very well.
23gwdzyu
2022-05-25 19:39:29 +0000 UTCYESSS ENGLISH
Proper_Sub
2022-05-25 15:47:56 +0000 UTCThank you very much for translating it
goric576
2022-05-25 13:53:06 +0000 UTCThanks a lot!
23gwdzyu
2022-05-25 13:46:02 +0000 UTCThank you for doing a translated version too! Are you planning to sell the translated compilation in DLsite as well?
cosmo
2022-05-25 13:36:40 +0000 UTC
