The Heat of Dorne Chapter 20
Added 2024-11-05 13:00:32 +0000 UTCThe finale of the King's Landing arc, in which Daemon says goodbye to his lovers, meets with a very grateful ally, and sets off on next adventure, one which promises to more harrowing than any he's gone on before.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mVl6VIaAQLdpR10k3xf2qPvYm8IkZmph0pIiDNAO9V4/edit?tab=t.0
With the King's Landing arc done, I wanted to ask what everyone thought of it. It was the most complex narrative I've written yet and I am pleased with how it turned out, but your feedback would be appreciated.
Comments
What a fantastic end to a fantastic arc !! Loved how it closed up the Blackfyre plot. Your writing is, as always, so good and I can’t wait to read about the North even if I’m also really sad that Arianne and the group won’t be there with Daemon…
TheWateringWizard
2024-11-06 18:55:06 +0000 UTCOh, there will be more of this story. It was the arc that ended.
Voivode_Writer
2024-11-05 16:44:04 +0000 UTCThat’s easy. I WANT MORE!! Please let there be a sequel.
Stemadaca
2024-11-05 16:31:24 +0000 UTCAwesome
John7799
2024-11-05 13:45:15 +0000 UTCI fixed it.
Voivode_Writer
2024-11-05 13:43:17 +0000 UTCThere are part of the Google doc highlighting yellow
John7799
2024-11-05 13:34:44 +0000 UTC
