An Improper Homecoming
Added 2024-09-06 11:51:05 +0000 UTCThe first chapter in what could be a larger Jon/Saera/other Targaryens story going forward if people like it enough.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ofhdiffu1onf0uGEygPpqv3Vn8qUnZLwwI3UX1BKnEA/edit
Comments
You have my vote to continue this!
J T
2024-09-20 13:46:05 +0000 UTCYou should definitely continue this story.
TheChosenOne
2024-09-07 06:53:14 +0000 UTCI thought Maegon was going to be the protagonist but boom a Jon expy rears his head. That being said, it could be nice to get some variety with a few OC MC’s. They don’t all need to be Jon or Harry.
Bellerophon
2024-09-06 23:17:49 +0000 UTCThat was excellent ! Love seeing Saera appear more in fics. Looking forward to more of this story. Maybe Saera will finally set Rhaenyra’s head straight
TheWateringWizard
2024-09-06 20:19:48 +0000 UTCReally great fic! It seems that the relationship between Jon and Saera is off to a great start! She has some catching up to do and Jon is more then willing to help her recover the years of missed pleasure. It would be interesting to see a second chapter for this story, one where Jon and Rhaenyra marry, and where Saera might join them and offer Rhaenyra some advice on how to properly satisfy Jon, after they have sex (Jon and Rhaenyra)
AlexF
2024-09-06 13:48:27 +0000 UTCAnother great fic! I know she was a bitch but I felt so bad for Saera and her sisters their parents were crap it’s sad more fics aren’t during their reign so they could get happiness. Loved John with Rhanerya and them talking about Laena etc I always love a fic that has her actually have people that love and trust her. Saera jon talk was great too her thinking she had upper hand and then being dominated. Bet she would corrupt Laena and rhaenrya a bit and give their fathers heart attacks 🤣
GrouchyGritic
2024-09-06 12:26:12 +0000 UTC
