A Friend's Worth Chapter 1
Added 2024-08-22 12:41:16 +0000 UTCThe first chapter of another old commission fic that I've decided to start posting.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WDCV2pRoaOjmZUVHSJ3rd-RhwIaUBEtx5Kxk5OtwiqA/edit
Comments
Holy shit. Nice!
Romavictrix
2024-09-05 21:05:14 +0000 UTCShe botch the ritual, she asked for power, intelligence and be more attractive, difficult to keep 3 thoughts at the same time, she added in the end be better to help Harry, so I believe know all her new benefits are focused in help Harry in any and all capacity.
Alatoic
2024-09-05 19:58:49 +0000 UTCCould be switch or femdom were she let the male believe he is in charge but she is the boss (even when appear that is not).
Alatoic
2024-09-05 19:54:54 +0000 UTCLove the idea of a book hidden in a boring book, with magic so well hidden or that is activated with a passive spell that can track if a person have read certain parts so then it can reveal its secrets to the reader only. Hope you can adapt it for further stories. Ritual magic was excellent idea. Hermione chew more than she could trying to get 3 things at once, hubris is always the fall of the bright. Its an excellent idea that the best way for Hermione to help Harry is to dominate him or be dominated (or make him believe he is in charge) and make him feel good and protected, I suppose all the brightness and cleverness gained will be solely focused in Harry' need's. I suppose the nurse will not find any spells or potions, maybe the ritual can be sensed but as is an internal change, not external interference and just improve what was already in her the Madam Pomfrey cant really do nothing. (just keep it secret). I really, really hope you can expand this story, will be quite interesting to see a Hermione that is taking charge (or be let Harry take charge) and what dynamic will be in the future.
Alatoic
2024-09-05 19:52:08 +0000 UTCI can’t tell if this is femdom or if it’s switch or what, but it’s hot and it seems interesting?
Beckendwarf
2024-08-23 01:42:13 +0000 UTCNot for me but the writing is excellent as usual
Bellerophon
2024-08-22 17:46:32 +0000 UTCDamn, what’s gotten into her ?
Daeron Targaryen
2024-08-22 14:25:41 +0000 UTCVery entertaining first chapter ! Can’t wait for more !
TheWateringWizard
2024-08-22 13:40:21 +0000 UTC
