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Story: New Job

Hey, first time having a story on here, huh? This was a commission from one JustAFallenWaffle! Here we see a girl getting her new job at a b

Hey, first time having a story on here, huh? This was a commission from one JustAFallenWaffle! Here we see a girl getting her new job at a bar... and the events that ensue. You can read it as a downloadable PDF here in the attachments. 

Bear with me, I'm not sure how to go about posting stories here on Patreon, so if the attachment doesn't work/is inelegant, I can try a different format down the road.

Story: New Job

Comments

I like the story and dialogue, but feel like the formatting could use more spicing up. Single-spaced black text on a white background can be hard on the eyes. 🥴 Personally, I separate each paragraph with a line break and will sometimes put a 'faded' version of the image as the background. Not saying to do *exactly* that, but presentation is equally as important as the actual story itself IMO

Swell Reads

Reading now, and hoping to someday get my own banger story from you!

Noti

Always good to see writing from you.

Victor89

Thank you so much for taking my comm! This story is FANTASTIC!!

JustAFallenWaffle

You GET it!! 🤝

JustAFallenWaffle

The GOAT of bloat at it again with another banger! Love it when you post stories, you always knock it out of the park

Silver Gold

Love the picture cant wait till I get home to see

Sallem


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