Story: New Job
Added 2024-02-29 22:30:35 +0000 UTCHey, first time having a story on here, huh? This was a commission from one JustAFallenWaffle! Here we see a girl getting her new job at a b
Hey, first time having a story on here, huh? This was a commission from one JustAFallenWaffle! Here we see a girl getting her new job at a bar... and the events that ensue. You can read it as a downloadable PDF here in the attachments.
Bear with me, I'm not sure how to go about posting stories here on Patreon, so if the attachment doesn't work/is inelegant, I can try a different format down the road.
Comments
I like the story and dialogue, but feel like the formatting could use more spicing up. Single-spaced black text on a white background can be hard on the eyes. 🥴 Personally, I separate each paragraph with a line break and will sometimes put a 'faded' version of the image as the background. Not saying to do *exactly* that, but presentation is equally as important as the actual story itself IMO
Swell Reads
2024-03-02 08:29:23 +0000 UTCReading now, and hoping to someday get my own banger story from you!
Noti
2024-03-02 01:18:29 +0000 UTCAlways good to see writing from you.
Victor89
2024-03-01 13:27:31 +0000 UTCThank you so much for taking my comm! This story is FANTASTIC!!
JustAFallenWaffle
2024-03-01 02:16:32 +0000 UTCYou GET it!! 🤝
JustAFallenWaffle
2024-03-01 02:15:53 +0000 UTCThe GOAT of bloat at it again with another banger! Love it when you post stories, you always knock it out of the park
Silver Gold
2024-03-01 02:02:55 +0000 UTCLove the picture cant wait till I get home to see
Sallem
2024-02-29 22:31:16 +0000 UTC
