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Raine critiques Kat's writing, suggested by Kamaro12!

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well, OOC issue for Kat...

Jackrabbit

Ah Raine, how cute and innocent you are.

Randall Hendren

I think we know~ *Winky face*

Joshua

i wounder if there will be a comic strip about what kats fanfic is

Mr Fuzz

The game "Risk of Rain" has forever ruined my context for that phrase.

Onefoursix Tym

I don’t know how I missed this. It’s hilarious because it’s true.

DarthKeidran

Jermaine Jackson and Pia Zadora : "- And when the Raine begins to fail" XD

Panther

Risk of Raine. Okay, who's gonna write it?

Kuroko

I think its because she still hasnt replaced her torn up shirt

tamtheotter

I thought Raine was always shy and socially awkward

RandomTonio

Why Raine is covering her breasts as Natani ? She's not trying to hide about her be a girl , meanwhile .......

Panther

Omg this is so cute XD and Kats reaction is priceless XD

Lexio

"A Risk of Raine." Nice reference.

James Scott

She probably just added Some “Art”

A original name

Kathrin: Uh Raine, that’s how you really are. Raine: Oh my god, you’re right! I’m a living fan fiction character, NOOOOO!!!! Kathrin facepalms as hard as she can.

SCD

Ranine is so cute. Like i just can't! Her character is so crazy and claw-some(She is so Red's wife later..)

Code Mystic Artist

"Vol. 1" makes me wonder how many volumes there are (or at least planned). XD

Rhawkas

So much denial from Raine, how fucking cute!

I think by that she meant that Kat nailed their personalities in her fanfic

Lauren Appelquist

Raine i just have one thing to say <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHC1230OpOg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHC1230OpOg</a>

Takumi Fujiwara

5 stars by Eric? I wonder what Kat had to do to get that...

Carlysle Brown

Kat's face says it all...

Carlysle Brown

Geez Raine really let herself go.

MoppyPuppy

Raine got him arrested for stalking and attempted sexual assault. Last I heard, he was a slave somewhere down in Wolf territory. I'm sure it's way below your pay grade, Mr. Sirus.

Sylvrwolflol

"Everyone else is perfect?" Like hell. They make Raine look like the diamond in their sordid rough.

Jordan Dean Ezekude

Haha, Kat's face makes this one for me. Silly Raine is so oblivious to how others see her. :D

csstats

We love you Raine because you are kind, sweet and gentle and no one can change that Raine. you may be shy but you will always be in are haerts.

Matthew Morgan

What happend to "raine is my girlfriend"?

Edmund Sirus

C’mon Raine! That personality is why we love you! Heje

DarthLeonite

*coughs* Yes you are Raine, but we still love you :)

KattTastic161

Everyone's a critic

DanthePaniniMan

I love the "⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ -Eric" on the back.

dylan hogan

Raine...not awkward....what? Are we talking about the same Raine?

Steve Gloria

*cries*

Finn Brenner

ok, maybe a little

Finn Brenner

...

Finn Brenner

Yeah Raine, I’m not shy or socially awkward either,

Finn Brenner

You sure about that Raine?

Cloud_Basterran

Kat is full of Judgement XD!

Kaija

Her reaction is me in a nutshell if people say anything about my social skills XD

"Knot intrested"? 8D

Kaija

I'm guessing Raine has not looked herself in a mirror in forever now. Also, Kat's expression is gold!

noxamillion

The five stars from eric is so perfect 👌

After her "I'm not like that at all!" line we just need Zen to put his arm around her and whisper in her ear "I knew it was just an act. Good to know."

InTheLionsDen

In a good way, or a bad way?

Backonninja

Hahaha! I love the ongoing saga of Raine and Kat's Fanfic. Wait a sec... now that I think about it, isn't this like, super creepy? Writing erotica about characters you like in fiction is one thing. But Kat's writing erotica about *her friends*. That's weeeeeird.

coredumperror

Eric giving Kat 5 stars is the cutest thing he's ever done

ArcadeDragon

Looks like Raine is _not interested in your fanfiction, Kat.

Elvenhunter84

Yes you are.

LupusK

I think you are shy Raine ^^

Natani Wolf

“A Risk of Raine”. No puns please.

Wolf guy

Not like that at all

Wolf guy

Yeah your not like that at all raine

Mediawatcher


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