Outclassed 2 - Page 47 (WIP)
Added 2025-11-22 14:34:41 +0000 UTCIt took a while but we got there, sorry about the roughly 37 pages of foreplay!
The following pages were fun to draw, I ended up modifying the script a lot shuffling panels around different pages to get something neat going, starting with the sketches for the different poses and moving them around the page to get a decent composition and shaping the panels around them, hence the somewhat irregular panel shapes from here on.
It's a little tough to keep everyone proportional relative to the couch here but I think it looks good, Rossi's shoulder width is smaller than Horacio and Suarez' but still wide enough to show he's pretty buff now and convey that he's smushed between two really big guys.
I went a little crazy with the details on the second panel, that sort of stuff and the difficult poses made these pages a little more demanding than usual but I hope the results are worth it.
Comments
Thanks a lot for the kind words and the support! Making art to please everyone is impossible and counterproductive to attempt, so I didn't really mean my apology from that angle. I'm thinking, for starters, from a script efficiency perspective, where every line of dialogue or action should be of service to the plot or theme or characters. I know it's porn, but I do care about telling well-paced stories, and I think Outclassed 2 ended up being a little longer than it could have. And second, I'm also thinking about people reading this comic in one go with the purpose of getting off when it's completed and published (more specifically their endurances), so getting to the climax (haha) of the story at the right time is something I took into consideration. So it's not exactly a "I'm sorry it turned out inefficient for this purpose, I will cater to you in the future" apology, but rather a "if you were reading this for that purpose, I'm sorry it wasn't my biggest priority, I first and foremost had a lot of horny little scenarios in my head I wanted to put to page, and it will happen again" apology.
Nanoff
2025-11-29 05:40:28 +0000 UTCOn the one hand, I believe there's a considerable part of the general furry audience who does indeed want "more action". Speaking only for myself, however, the scenario and characterization make all of it a lot hotter. I like your pirates, but I also don't really know them like that. These guys I know and I like seeing them bounce off each other. It makes me less skeptical-and-cynical-porn-brain. I'm bought in, belief willingly suspended in advance. You seem to release all your Patreon content publicly a certain amount of time later. If I wasn't satisfied, maybe I'd just wait (and maybe others have). I often don't see it here first. I don't need to see it before everyone else. I just want you to keep doing exactly the kind of stuff you already do. Walter's surprise at not "being Horacio's" is priceless. Your football/history dudes are always compelling. By all means, draw more porn if you want, I just hate reading "sorry for all the foreplay" when I'd have gladly accepted "you're welcome for all the dicks-and-ass-out full-contact foreplay". :devilsmile: It's not like you did a 40-page furry Law and Order ripoff for no reason.
DrPepperFiend
2025-11-26 07:35:11 +0000 UTCCase in point: depicting the string of Suarezβs precum connecting his glans with the jock. πππ₯
Mike Ryan
2025-11-22 22:46:17 +0000 UTCThe results are ALWAYS worth it. π
Mike Ryan
2025-11-22 22:40:28 +0000 UTC
