Got most of the sketch changes done that I wanted. I still need to finish sketching the wraps that are around their hips, and finish up the boys' hands - those kinda go together, since I decided to try and draw one of Sythe's hands like he's grabbed hold of Maren's bikini and used it to help him pull her down onto his knot. Also need to remember the ties in Raine's hair, got the one added to her tail. I'd like to include Maren's hat, but I don't think there's quite enough room - I don't think it'll read correctly just kinda going off the edge of the canvas, be hard to draw enough of it in the space available to make it properly read as an upside down hat or something.
I also couldn't resist doing a few touch ups to the Seff and Ash thumbnail set after hours.