Charity Case Ch9:Pg 29 process and high res
Added 2022-06-13 19:07:33 +0000 UTCI challenged myself to finish the top panel (from flat to final) in an hour...I keep spending too long on the crowds! It's a bit lumpy but it will DO
also george of the jungle is trans now, it's canon uwu. I'm sad I had to get rid of his toucan tho, it was too out of place!
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That's the right order! Following from last page's 'proper? you're wearing lingerie!' I think a page-by-page format is pretty bad here! I'll take it into account and maybe change the dialogue :). I was planning to shuffle the latter panel bubbles though, because the flow is a bit awkward
Malacandrax
2022-06-14 16:32:23 +0000 UTCI know it's not easy to place speech bubbles when the characters's positions don't work well with it, but the way they are now, I can't NOT read Roman's first sentence before Marnie's, even though I assume that's not the intended order. Marnie's bubble is both to the right AND lower than Roman's bubble, it feels pretty counter-intuitive to read it first ^^" Other than that, great page as always!
Claire
2022-06-14 16:23:37 +0000 UTC
