I often make small edits to text or the art, but since this was a big one I thought I would share it. I couldn't handle how messy it was- and since I've been increasing detail in later pages I figured I could sort this one out :P! I mostly just clarified the shapes and added darker tones.
Malacandrax
2018-11-11 11:38:17 +0000 UTCHari draws
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