As I started to refine my way of doing things, my deprecated versions and my final versions converged, right around this point. From here on out, I only have one final version of each page, with a few in-progress versions of the same image along the way.
The old dialogue might be interesting to someone though. In this case, Kiva drops more clues to how Kiera's Vim functions. I changed it because it's largely nonsensical, even in the proper context. I also wanted to give Kiva a chance to vent his frustration a little bit. To give him a little bit more character, since he really, really doesn't like living in Kuserra.