running commentary
Added 2019-11-24 19:00:02 +0000 UTCif you thought i've been on my bullshit recently you aint seen NOTHING yet
the subject of this sequence is Ash, the nonbinary protag of "And We're Live"! they popped in that one too -- and will probably pop in future pieces -- but you can rest assured that any story/sequence where that happens is Not Canon.
Comments
That's no way to keep the security deposit! The sense of full body buildup and scare-rousal is a lot of fun here and that last li'l heart heading for orbit is excellent.
Seritaph
2019-11-24 22:19:09 +0000 UTCGosh, Ash is cute as all heck and this sequence is magnificent at selling the building tension. Glad to hear that continuity is a bit fiddly when it comes to Ash and bursting — I felt just a little bit bad for enjoying the explosive finale of their debut story so much, if only cos their character was so endearing, so it’s nice to know blowing apart is something they can bounce back from. :3
DonutBronut
2019-11-24 19:57:35 +0000 UTC
