T.P.H - Chapter 27
Added 2024-05-02 17:21:11 +0000 UTCAlice continues in her attempts to try and show Jay how dedicated she is, and Jay is obviously happy to use her to continue his experiments.
I'm trying some new stuff with the covers of the chapters, hopefully, I'll learn some new things.
Comments
Fixed typos on pages 05 and 17
RollB
2024-05-03 15:02:29 +0000 UTCThank you for mentioning it, I'll be fixing the typos. I make a few of them because of tunnel vision so I appreciate people helping spotting them out
RollB
2024-05-03 14:50:31 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Very fun to see the development with Alice. She's come a long way since the beginning. Think there's a few typos: Page 5 - "That I can be into a good subject" rather than "I can be a good subject". And maybe "That's it Alice" rather than "This is it Alice" (although that one still kind of works)? Page 17 - "you will super horny for me" needs a "be" between "will" and "super"
TranquilSmirks
2024-05-03 10:58:37 +0000 UTC
