Good suggestions, thanks! I stumpled upon the "A student-" beginning of the phrase before, too, but didn't know if it was confusing.
Lisa Brenner
2020-02-03 09:21:49 +0000 UTC
I've been rereading the last few pages, I have a suggestion regarding the language, I feel like for clarity you should change "A student" to "a straight-A student" or like "an A student"