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Eden Academy: Chapter Seven

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Eden Academy: Chapter Seven

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somehow pete's now my new favorite...

We're getting there!

Nice tie in with the last couple Sammy series. Bring on Grayson and Archie next!

Bella Lime

Fantastic chapter! You put everything that preceded together and clearly shows how it all fits in. For me the sex while entertaining is secondary to the character development and story line. Where Pete ends up sexually is one thing but I want to know what kind of a coach and teacher he is. And on a human level will he find love. There is another thing that separates you as a writer from many others you make the characters believable. As to Sammy I have many questions. Will he find an equal and a partner yes he is still very young age wise but also wise beyond his years as he story reaved.

I mean, am I dying to see Pete bitched out? Absolutely. But the slow burn in your stories always makes the payoff that much more explosive.

Thanks I was worried people wouldn’t like the lack of sex.

Ugh, need so much more! Love the worldbuilding here.

Twisted as fuck - as in the best fucking way.

Steve Leonard


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