The Interim Domain 0.23.0 Now Live

As i've commented before on Now & Then your story telling skills are through the roof, and I really like that your novels focused around character interactions and personalities instead of like many others just having interactions being a way to get to the sexy stuff. 10/10 for originality, setup, world building, character design and pretty much everything. One thing I find weird though is just like in Now & Then the pacing seems off, like MC is wasting alot of time doing nothing at all. I'm only at day 26, but already i'm sensing a bit of a pattern. Like interact with one girl each day and then MC does what? with the rest of the day, some of the interactions are what would seem to take less than an hour and then he just goes to sleep. Like said i'm just at day 26 and don't know if there is gonna be a grand explanation for this behaviour later on, but at least for now it feels weird as hell and kinda ruins alot of the immersion feel of the novel. Another thing is also that I don't think he ask Mira enough questions about world state etc and this also swings back to pacing, like who would be in his situation for 26 days without even asking why he don't need to eat, why there is only vodka in the kitchen, why the car disappears, some training, how to identify other archons, how other character's lifecycle function and alot of other stuff that any semi-sane person would do in the given situation. Add to that that he has been wearing the same outfit for 25 out of these 26 days and that he waste time to go looking for people that he can send a text to, then he complains about being run ragged and being tired and having a full plate, while what we as reader have seen him do in 26 dayes would not tire out any normal person to accomplish in like less than 5-10 days. This makes MC feel inconsistent, illogical and unrelatable. As a another note, after he gets his ass whooped by Wooden, it would be nice if he like inquired a bit about combat capabilities or what to do if such a situation arises again. Like given the so far gained knowledge he should assume the Wooden can just find him again and literally teleport to his location at any given moment, but instead of seeking valuable information on how to deal with the danger he goes of on a tantrum like a 12 year old that doesn't percieve this encounter as any real danger or has no suvival instinct whatsoever. This may seem like harsh criticism, but please don't get me wrong. I'm just trying to point out the few flaws that i see, and the reason i'm being maybe a bit to blunt about is that these flaws just seems like blaring oversights compared to how great the rest of the novel is constructed, this all being in hopes that it may help you improve the experience of this otherwise incredible piece of artwork. You're a true artist and I hate to see the quality of this masterpiece be lowered by small mistakes that taint the overall picture. Keep up the good work and sorry if I offended in any way, I greatly appreciate your skill and creativity.

Singularity