From Now On - NEW Book 2 chpt 1 pt 2
Added 2023-11-05 07:29:01 +0000 UTCThanks everyone that gave me constructive criticism for the last part. I'm much happier with this version and it would've been a flop without you! I took many shortcuts the first time and I made sure to take my time and rethink the whole scene. I feel it's more impactful and now sets up events that will recur later in the series.
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Thank you!
Anamadic
2023-11-05 21:54:41 +0000 UTCIt's Perfect! Great job
UberOctavian
2023-11-05 18:52:50 +0000 UTCThanks for your help!
Anamadic
2023-11-05 08:54:32 +0000 UTCThis version is much better, it has a much greater impact. I am excited for what comes next!!
Technosavy6758
2023-11-05 07:59:25 +0000 UTC
