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Added 2021-03-11 08:33:49 +0000 UTC※If you understand English, please check if the lines are correct.
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Ah,I see.What else can you say?
黒漆
2021-03-12 07:06:16 +0000 UTCSorry for being late, but it's mostly fine. "Penetrating into my very" sounds a bit too formal/scientific for the situation, but I don't have anything better to suggest. I'll let you know if I think of anything
黒ウ
2021-03-12 04:09:10 +0000 UTCThanks you.That helps me a lot.
黒漆
2021-03-11 13:36:44 +0000 UTCI think you should omit the word “violently” and replace “drilling” with “penetrating”
dennel90
2021-03-11 11:39:39 +0000 UTCOf course! I'll help when I can! I enjoy your comics ( ◜‿◝ )♡
daxjaden
2021-03-11 09:12:33 +0000 UTCThanks for your cooperation! If you like, please continue to help.
黒漆
2021-03-11 09:09:35 +0000 UTCEnglish looks good! Maybe for "This suit getting tightened...! Use "This suit is getting too tight...!" But the rest reads good for me.
daxjaden
2021-03-11 08:46:00 +0000 UTC
