"Until We're All But Ash"
Added 2025-06-16 23:23:54 +0000 UTCI remixed "Until We're All But Ash." I really liked the song, and the message means everything to me, but there were just some production things I wasn't crazy about. So I'm really hoping this ones better! Gave it everything! Let me know what you think!
Lyric
I see the pain beneath your eyes
Behind that mask, a frail disguise
You should know it kills me
Watching this
Take your everything
I see it draw you in
The edge of hell’s abyss
I swear I’d give my life top save you
I’m promising that I’m not afraid
I’ll pull you out from this burning cage
And if it rages I’ll bear the flames
I won’t give up until ashes remain
I hear the cracks beneath your voice
A tortured cry, a fractured choice
It tears right through me
Watching you
Drown in this poison stream
I see them fire away
These demons fan their flames
I’m begging you to fight just fight
I’m promising that I’m not afraid
I’ll pull you out from this burning cage
And if it rages I’ll bear the flames
I won’t give up until ashes remain
I watch you slowly break
You’re fragile soul decay
We all fall far from grace
Still love remains
There’s nothing I can say
I beg you turn your face
I’m screaming won’t you
Please just come back home
You know you’re not alone
We can mend your soul
Just come home
I’m promising that I’m not afraid
I’ll pull you out from this burning cage
And if it rages I’ll bear the flames
I won’t give up until ashes remain
Comments
Thanks for letting me know! That’s my biggest struggle in music. I’ll bump the vocals up some more 🙏
Nathan Wagner
2025-06-18 15:37:59 +0000 UTCMmm, honestly, I prefer the previous version. The vocals were so clear and the whole track felt more emotionally charged. Don't get me wrong I love the lyrics, it's just this current version sounds like the vocals and instrumentals are drowning each other.
Andre van Rooyen
2025-06-18 15:35:59 +0000 UTC
