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A Promise Kept - Chapter 65 - The Gamble

Quite the turn of events...

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Interesting lol

Finnspa23

Fuck the vB patriarch. Kill him. Hell, slip Sabine a bit of cocaine or something, as long as she gets enough courage to threaten her sperm donor to find a way to void the marriage contract if he knows what's good for him. Good on Harry for coming in to the Wizenganot with a political mass Crucio.

Hadrian v.E.

I know. Since this plot device is incredibly stupid, the author should have no problem inventing a solution like Harry inventing a ritual to exchange her sperm donor's life for her freedom. I've 0 respect and empathy for the fucker for (1) treating his children like chattel; and (2) getting in bed with terrorists.

Hadrian v.E.

The whole thing with the contract still feels so stupidly contrived, it's clear Sabine never agreed to it, only her parents did on her behalf, yet breaking it somehow means SHE loses her magic, not her parents. It doesn't make much sense to me, it feels like a not-so cleverly disguised plot device that's just there to excuse the unnecessary melodrama. It only detracts from what is otherwise a great story.

aroeah126

That was mean 😁

AndrΓ© Ferreira

About time but I don’t think he wants the post but to distract them while levels the playing field, the post would be nice but it would make it harder to do things he needs to do, unless deal was made with the goblins which means he has the numbers on his side.

Joe Schindler

Lol... super!MC as Minister? Then again, with the way this fic has been going, can't expect the remaining characters (other than the villains) to have any real role of their own.

pra86

That was epic! I solemnly hope it pays off for Harry! πŸ™πŸ™

Keon

The chapter name is certainly accurate

James Shay


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