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A Promise Kept - Chapter 55 - The Wonders of a Full Moon

An interesting chapter with some action, among other things...

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I'm actually pleased that the antagonists are somewhat more competent, but wow the supporting cast of Harry is terrible. I remember in Whispers of a Raven where the 'heroes' were standing in like a circle and were able to decimate a werewolf attack and in the same story Harry got rid of all the wolves in the OG timeline. I think this playa version of Harry isn't, despite his profanity towards Voldy & the DE's, isn't really on it compared to your other Harry's. Having said that, I do think the writer should've compensated this for making Lily, Sirius & the other Order members more stronger. Oh but, I forgot no one can be as good as Harry. Anyway, thanks for the chapter.

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