Avalon - Chapter 32 - Le Morte
Added 2024-10-20 13:00:11 +0000 UTCThe tale continues...
Comments
Weill be interesting to see Merlin's reaction when he sees the inferi and the strange women conducting them.
TheSerpent
2024-10-22 16:20:57 +0000 UTCWell guess the fairies served their purpose then. Perhaps Morgana will be of great help with these new powers, glad they are in the hands of a force for good like her though. Goodness knows what kind of path she might have gone down had it not been for Harry.
TheSerpent
2024-10-22 16:19:24 +0000 UTCI think that was more of Merlin playing stupid and fishing more intel than anything. Merlin knew exactly why they would be on Stenger's tail and really if Merlin did not have use for someone like Strenger then I am sure he would dispose of him, but for know he has use for him.
TheSerpent
2024-10-22 16:18:14 +0000 UTCQuestion, why would Merlin be confused as to why godric and salazar are on Strengers tail? Is it not obvious why they are tracking him down?
Reshad Haniff
2024-10-21 19:14:32 +0000 UTCI was really hoping that Strenger was going to run into Godric and Harry while running away from the dead. Would've been a quick way for them to deal with that one problem lol. They have so many piling up that I figured it would help them along. I'm really interested in seeing what is done with Morgana's new powers, or more advanced powers.
AlexanderR
2024-10-21 04:09:29 +0000 UTCSalazar comes across as very responsible and wise, but he doesn't seem to be living up to the legend / HP lore. Godric seems seasoned, but he's been instrumental to Harry's development, which made that early part of the story really gd to read. There's hardly any scenes with Helga & Rowena. Just feels like a tricks been missed on fleshing these characters out, considering the opportunity you presented yourself in writing this period rather than going over skirmishes with OC villains that we know Harry is going to defeat. Some parts have felt skipable, but I commend the effort you're making, considering there's not much to from and you're making Merlin the antagonist, in writing this story. Just as long as we don't get that laughing Harry story plz π
Sunny
2024-10-20 22:30:49 +0000 UTCNo one has ever mentioned if phoenix fire would be enough to destroy them. If Harry were as connected to his wand as before, should his wand not be able to produce phoenix fire the way it did against Grindlewald?
Edward
2024-10-20 18:56:57 +0000 UTCIndeed here comes the fiendfyre. It would have been interesting if a little more educated harry had come from the future
Fallou Amar
2024-10-20 13:47:10 +0000 UTC
