Avalon - Chapter 22 - The Rise
Added 2024-09-15 13:00:09 +0000 UTCAn interesting chapter with a glimpse of what is to come...
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Can’t read it’s upsetting
Durin Wellesley
2024-09-22 02:44:29 +0000 UTCForgot to add, I wonder what Nimue's endgame is. The big obvious manipulator so far has been Myrrdin, but with the revelation a few chapters ago of Nimue's interaction with Guinevere, we now know that Nimue can be just as manipulative as Myrrdin in playing with the pieces. It will be interesting to see how this all plays out.
Dino Bacani
2024-09-15 18:44:57 +0000 UTCMy assumption is that we're going to see how Harry's original reality handles Voldemort, but not that he's going to be involved in any way. Though that would be amazing if Harry could somehow get back to that world, if only to deal with Voldemort. I imagine it would be a quick match after dealing with Myrddin. What's happening to Arthur only becomes more sad as these chapters go on. It'd be interesting to see him find out and possibly become a dark figure in the story.
AlexanderR
2024-09-15 15:44:24 +0000 UTCIt's interesting how you have made King Arthur so like how we see Canon Harry, manipulated and taken advantage of with Myrrdin akin to Dumbledore pulling his strings. Because of that, I hope that he gets a 'revelatory' and realizes that he is just a pawn in Myrrdin's game. This makes me also want to see what you would do with an Arthurian story. I've seen what you can do with Harry, (and apparently other fandom heroes, but I come for the Harry fanfic) making him into a hero that we all want, it makes me wonder what you can do with Arthur.
Dino Bacani
2024-09-15 14:22:37 +0000 UTCI don't like voldemort's continued importance in this story. This was an alright chapter but kinda felt like a cop-out, Harry has been training for years at this point and the first moment a confrontation with a bulit up enemy is going to happen, Voldemort pops up and Harry isn't fighting at full strength to show off his training. Its frustrating. I did enjoy Morgana coming in for the save and showing off her prowess and introducing herself as his wife was nice. If Harry knows about Lancelot's betrayal, maybe he could he use it in some manner in the future.
Zai
2024-09-15 14:04:35 +0000 UTC
