Avalon - Chapter 18 - Departure
Added 2024-09-01 13:00:14 +0000 UTCThree years on from the previous chapter...
Comments
This was a Beautifull chapter
André Ferreira
2024-09-02 22:41:57 +0000 UTCSo much going on here! This was a very emotionally powerful chapter, I am really eager to see how this continues.
Mark Quaker
2024-09-02 19:03:47 +0000 UTCQuite an emotional chapter tbh, but not in the sense that it was teary. Harry's conversation with Godric and the sacrifice that he and Morgana did were done brilliantly. I'm acc kinda glad he's off on his own, cause it makes the journey that more difficult and I like how you've set the foundation as to where Harry is magically and physically over the last 3yrs. I don't particularly like the narrative that just because Harry's powerful, he's more of a Peverell than a Potter. Anyway, thanks for the chapter and I look forward to the next.
Sunny
2024-09-02 06:14:35 +0000 UTCIf I was Guinevere I’d be worried about Merlin wanting to f*** Arthur, what a creep.
Matthew
2024-09-01 21:38:38 +0000 UTCWow, so Harry is finally going to create is legacy. Didn't Morgana to into an owl before? Can she turn into multiple animals? I'm not sure if she said so. Can Harry now turn into multiple animals using her method? I'd be great if he can turn into a crow to scout, a wolf to track and a horse to blend in. Thanks for the update.
Hannibal St.Michael
2024-09-01 16:54:15 +0000 UTCGodric isn't wrong, Harry and Morgana are pretty much all but married, and now that their magic has bonded as it has they are all the more closer. I could see Morgana leaving the forest at some point in the future, perhaps not permanently, perhaps even Harry coming to live with her there maybe?
TheSerpent
2024-09-01 16:33:04 +0000 UTCLove can be quite powerful magic, though curious to see how Morgana's love protection with Harry will affect those who wish to cause him harm, since we all saw how Lily's was with Tom, but that was a different kind of love that she imparted on him compared to the kind Morgana and Harry share and the protection they imparted on each other through the blood magic. Lily was a different witch compared to Morgana as well, Morgana delves more into the kinds of magic that others might consider darker and frowned upon.
TheSerpent
2024-09-01 16:31:57 +0000 UTCWell to be fair usually most of previous works tend to have a slow build up with history and all factoring in til the real action starts. Has been usual trend of how things go. Usually time skips involved as well.
TheSerpent
2024-09-01 16:29:49 +0000 UTCFinally things might be picvking up. This was much closer to the quality of some of your previous stories. I'm hopingm it is something that will be maintained now.
Tim Willan
2024-09-01 13:25:07 +0000 UTC
