Avalon - Chapter 10 - Pursuit
Added 2024-08-04 13:00:08 +0000 UTCThe adventure continues...
Comments
Lol fair enough. I'm sure I've missed similar instances of a word out of time. This one just seemed to catch my attention and pull me out of the scene.
The Humble CTurtle
2024-08-05 18:23:57 +0000 UTCIf he was using era appropriate language, we wouldn’t be able to understand a thing.
Matthew
2024-08-05 18:03:25 +0000 UTCI hope the extent of Harry's horcrux absorption is being a parselmouth and nothing more. Anyway, this story has been pretty gd so far and I've enjoyed how you've written the other characters, like the founders, Morgana, Merlin & Arthur. Thanks for the chapter and I look forward to the next one.
Sunny
2024-08-05 16:01:38 +0000 UTCJust a small thing I noticed. Castor says the word 'fallout' when discussing the you-know-what. That word would not have existed during that time.
The Humble CTurtle
2024-08-05 15:07:05 +0000 UTCFirstly, aren't there cushioning charms or maybe specific charms to help make horse riding more bearable. I'm surprised in that day and age that Wizards wouldn't know them. Godric's Hollow was a surprise destination, that's going to shake Harry up, I think. Thanks for the update.
Hannibal St.Michael
2024-08-04 20:48:55 +0000 UTCThis can become the story of Harry and Godric traveling around Britain. I'm loving it, and I'm all for it.
AlexanderR
2024-08-04 14:49:58 +0000 UTC
