The Reaver's Legacy - The Summer
Added 2023-07-13 13:00:06 +0000 UTCNow things will start to become more real....
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Well don’t getting rid of Katie. It’s not a very good pairing so now you can use her death to fuel different plot lines without killing off a more important character
Eric
2023-10-09 22:40:10 +0000 UTC“Bugger that,” Harry retorted. “I’m not going to be kept in the dark. You will either be transparent with me or the lot of you can piss off.” I think that ever since you wrote Arcturus Black in Honour Thy Blood you've written him, Charlus and Harry, or whoever is a major protagonist, as being very potty-mouthed and rude. I get that he's angry and feel that the adults are wrong to exclude him, and much of the rest of the dialogue wasn't in the same vein, but still... While I enjoy your stories a lot - enough to having supported you for over 2 years and counting! - I for one would love to see a smooth-talking Arcturus who's a great politician who knows how to weigh his words carefully, or a less juvenile sounding Harry (ironic I know, given his age in most stories) who is less hostile, but can still stand up for himself. Just a thought. Keep up the amazing work!
Orion Nebulous
2023-07-17 00:02:50 +0000 UTCI think this one has the most devolpment of harry yet. We get a larger range of harry that this with rose and flower for the soul really show your improvement.
Kyle Spence
2023-07-14 02:21:33 +0000 UTC
