The Reaver's Legacy - Discoveries
Added 2023-03-19 14:49:19 +0000 UTCApologies for the delay, Patreon decided it did not want to release the chapter...
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Honestly I wouldn’t mind a Harry/Katie this time around, you literally never find a good story with that pairing around these days.
RyanMK666
2023-03-23 23:56:35 +0000 UTCMixed feelings so far.. intrigued by the Death/Hallows plot line certainly, but so far too much has been recycled from reading canon for my liking, just always feels redundant etc.. Letters and chasing seemed a little out there, but nonetheless still interested where you’ll take those characters
Tom
2023-03-21 00:34:16 +0000 UTCThis was a pretty well written chapter. I enjoy the pace you’ve set, following the original timeline but introducing your own plot at a steady pace. I’m intrigued, and I can’t wait to see where this story leads.
Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts
2023-03-20 20:12:31 +0000 UTCHave to agree. You have never used Ron or Hermione as even a side character, and a Year 1 story seems like it needs them. Even just one of the two would be interesting and a nice change of pace
Zach B
2023-03-20 16:37:57 +0000 UTCSome Ron and Hermione love would be great this story. Solid friendships that last through Harry’s changes with them aren’t something I remember seeing in your stories before. Harry/Katie is underused, hope to see it this time
thevolunteer
2023-03-20 16:29:28 +0000 UTCwoah
Jim Bob
2023-03-20 07:51:18 +0000 UTCI really like this and I like the subtle depth you've added to the chasers (please can you add some substance to Ron & Hermione, i.e. a proper golden trio). Also, Harry's small progress was done well. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one. p.s., please can you slow down Yrs 1-3? Possibly have them b/w 4-7 parts, cause it'll be nice to see the progress and the interaction changes b/w OG characters and different canon moments.
Sunny
2023-03-19 23:52:51 +0000 UTCReally good start to this. A lot to explore
Nick Coffey
2023-03-19 21:57:45 +0000 UTCI voted against this story in the poll, but I have to say the beginning definitely has me intrigued. Looking forward to Thursday.
Rick Malone
2023-03-19 21:17:14 +0000 UTCI was hopping for an eventually Bones pairing but I'm thinking Luna is a more appropriate pairing with all the mysticism that we're about to experience! As I see it Harry is a child in this story and would be also a child in the next year, so I'd love to see Harry and Lune evolve together!
Κωνσταντίνος Σφυριδάκης
2023-03-19 20:08:11 +0000 UTCYou won’t see hermione from Baron, he’s gone on record to say it’s one of his least favourite pairings, however Luna WOULD be an interesting one this time around with the context of the story.
RyanMK666
2023-03-19 17:57:06 +0000 UTCFor paring I would like Luna or Hermione haven't seen this author take on them
Robert
2023-03-19 17:37:36 +0000 UTCDamn, I’ve only read both like 4 times. I should probably know that by now.
Shawn
2023-03-19 17:27:42 +0000 UTCI think you mean „The green in the grey“
Marcel
2023-03-19 17:16:53 +0000 UTCI’m gonna call it now. Harry/Katie. Baron the Vagrant papaired Leo and Katie in ‘A Flower for a Soul’.
Shawn
2023-03-19 16:44:00 +0000 UTCNice chapter, I love it 😉👍
Sébastien Boussely
2023-03-19 15:41:22 +0000 UTCWhat’s the pairing of this story going to be?
Sal
2023-03-19 15:38:02 +0000 UTCIt was a very nice chapter. And the cover’s nice too.
The Anarchist
2023-03-19 14:59:44 +0000 UTC
