Written in the Stars - Under the Mark
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Comments
I took days off to read when the roses bloom again. This story I am struggling to make my self continue to read. As usual, the dueling you write is the best I have come across and you add real grit and realism to the childish magic of normal Harry Potter fics, I just really dislike the MC in this story, we have been told about all his good qualities but rarely show them. And so far he just seems like an entitled prat with delusions of grandeur. His eternal anger about the death of his parents, understandably, has not changed at all, it is just the same simple anger as always that he has developed no self control over or shown any growth in its regards
Luthanor
2023-02-02 08:13:33 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, loved the duel and I hope that you are doing better with the covid. Thanks for the chapter and take care.
Thor
2022-12-23 19:41:21 +0000 UTC
