Written in the Stars - An Unexpected Ally
Added 2022-11-17 14:01:00 +0000 UTCHere is the next chapter for you guys...
Things will become taking a darker turn soon where we will veer away from canon quite considerably...
Comments
I hope for Lucinda and Harry! Daphne is fine as a teenage romance
elisabetta violi
2022-11-20 12:15:23 +0000 UTCThis one was caught on Discord and added to the beta's Word doc, but I appreciate you pointing it out. I do occasionally see a typo mentioned in these Comments that wasn't caught on Discord. Thank you for your help.
odzoo
2022-11-19 05:44:00 +0000 UTCNahh this is tight on Lucinda, wtf Mr McCusker, haha! I'm curious how you will veer the storyline away from canon and the conversation between Gellert and Albus, along with Remus and Sirius, was nice touch. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.
Sunny
2022-11-17 23:55:42 +0000 UTCI’m on team Harry/Daphne and I hope you’re not just teasing :)
Orion Nebulous
2022-11-17 19:16:17 +0000 UTCWhew - this was a long one. A lot going on here. I'm wondering if Dumbledore was just saying he would help Harry so that Gellert would drop it. I'm sure Dumbledore can interpret "helping" Harry as many things.
AlexanderR
2022-11-17 18:33:38 +0000 UTCJust wanted to point out that MOD Harry could have immortality and therefore be a great match for a certain vampire. Just saying
Shaitan
2022-11-17 18:32:52 +0000 UTCSeeing as he’s quite happy abusing Tom’s knowledge he got from the soul share I can’t see him having any moral issues accepting the help from Grindlewald.
Bellerophon
2022-11-17 17:58:13 +0000 UTCDuring the part Albus and Gellert are talking, there is a typo. You wrote “that not” instead of “that night” when talking about the power he knows not.
thevolunteer
2022-11-17 16:28:23 +0000 UTCyea i couldn't login either... maybe a temp glitch. Anyway good to have the story pick up pace :D
Sayantan Roy
2022-11-17 15:36:17 +0000 UTCI’m honestly so worried about the next task, I hope Viktor will be okay. Is Harry really going to return to Durmstrang if Voldemort does come back? I have a feeling he will stay in Britain. But his friends…hmm, honestly I have no idea where this is all going and I am as apprehensive as I am excited.
ellen
2022-11-17 15:27:18 +0000 UTCI’m both dreading and anticipating the next chapter, I am worried with what you’re going to do with the final task, but you’ve never disappointed in a major plot point in all your stories just yet, so I’m just going to wait with baited breaths. Looking forward to Sunday.
RyanMK666
2022-11-17 14:55:53 +0000 UTCDon't you dare kill Viktor
Lazy Lemon
2022-11-17 14:51:45 +0000 UTCJust tested and it is working fine
Lee McCusker
2022-11-17 14:18:22 +0000 UTCis the website down i enter the password you sent yesterday and its just says try again
shadowlegion27
2022-11-17 14:14:33 +0000 UTC
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