Written in the Stars - Champions
Added 2022-10-23 13:00:08 +0000 UTCHogwarts anyone? Things will become rather interesting from here in many ways...
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Wow. Bit of a surprise not having Harry be selected. I must admit I was expecting it but I suppose things will change from here out. Can’t wait for Draco’s first humbling experience against Harry. I did love how he got out in his place in green in the grey. I’m curious how you’ll handle revealing his black heirship. As always I love reading your work
wild_bill
2022-10-24 00:55:18 +0000 UTCI'm pleased that Harry hasn't been selected, bravo on doing something different. Besides that, I enjoyed how wrote Harry's entrance and his brief interaction with Slytherin house and Pansy. Re the other main characters, please can you not bash the golden two of the trio, as it's kinda overdone and reading Ron saying slimy snake constantly is a heavy trope. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.
Sunny
2022-10-23 22:53:12 +0000 UTC
