[WIP] Chapter 70
Added 2024-12-29 17:54:58 +0000 UTCHello, dear Patrons!
It's been a while and it's almost end of the year 🥲🥲 Anyway, I just upload to show you the progress. I just done until this part, chapter 70 is pretty long and boring with a lot of text. But there's some progress.
I will continue the lineart tomorrow, so here please read the sketch WIP of the chapter first while waiting TTwTT/
warning: not proofed. Sketch stage.
Lmao this chapter is so jumbled because of course, I can't escape the multiple unused alternative of storyboard:
I actually want to continue make ravi troubling yolka and make him even more jealous, but helll I made 30 panels+ of that with no plot progression, with how slow I work I think if I made this way then we'll spend another year before yolka meeting andra's family, so I fasten things this way😭😭 I'll make the man appear again in the future. I haven't told you ravi's background... what proposal, why he is trolling yolka so much.
Anyhow, we finally meet andra's family. His family follows a certain naming system: -dra/-ra for males, and -dri/-ri for females. Very usual practice in beta households where the children usually more than 3 (patterned naming system)
Andra - Rendra - Indra - Ravindra
Asuri - Sindri
They are all below 170cm except the third child (rendra), which make yolka smiled when seeing a bunch of similar looking, similar sized, similar height, andra-alike people😂
Sindri, andra's sister's skepticism is actually very real. In author's country, sometimes happen--if you, a naive underpriviledge person somehow get a rich, old-money looking partner with mysteriously big house, you were bound to be dead soon (you will be used as sacrifice to maintain the family's wealth; often requires 'family member' as the sacrifice, thus is why they allowed you to be married into the family, making you a 'family member'. Yeppp like that 'ready or not' movie setting plot. That happens here.)
Andra's sister studies legal, she seen shits😂
Look forward to the finished--colored chapter! Andra's family is a little more interesting than yolka's family of three. I will draw andra's backstory in next chapter.
Thank you for your support and patience! Have a nice day😭😭🙇🙇🙇
oh and I managed to put in a meme. WHY ARE YOU GAE
Comments
Thank you!! The next chapter is also already uppp
SUMAJA
2025-02-25 08:48:58 +0000 UTCThank you for your support and welcome!! Hahahahah the next chap is already up, enjoyyy
SUMAJA
2025-02-25 08:48:40 +0000 UTCThank you for your support!! AAAA welcome!
SUMAJA
2025-02-25 08:48:20 +0000 UTCHe did, but not the real anaconda😂just the gist of it!
SUMAJA
2025-02-25 08:48:08 +0000 UTCLongest chapter yet and I luv it!!!!!!!! I'm excited to see it colored!! Also Happy New Year!! I'm glad I decided to check my patreon today for this gold.
Bookie
2025-01-07 18:55:22 +0000 UTCHappy new year!! I'm so excited to join your Patreon and I'm so glad I did. I've read every chapter 3 times by now because I'm so invested 😂 I can't wait for this chapter ❤️❤️
Susan James
2025-01-04 08:24:25 +0000 UTCI love this. I’m so excited to see it finished. I started and finished all of this within a day and had to subscribe. You’re doing amazing! I love this story line
Darkrai
2025-01-03 01:07:12 +0000 UTCThe ending of this tells me he may have seen the anaconda
Kaine
2025-01-03 00:33:47 +0000 UTCOhh! That part, me mentioned he will try to keep andra until he die or he die trying, so if he somehow get into accident and marked an omega--andra is leaving him, he meant he will die and leave him half his wealth, and left the other half for his parents because they need to have another child to replace him (because he is going to die) It's kinda red flag, but yolka really meant it and not as a mere threat. He has conscience as an alpha who acknowledge andra as his mate, so if he become another omega's mate even by accident means he is betraying andra + andra won't forgive him and is leaving him = he is guilty and failing as andra's mate and determined it's better to die than to live and shackled to someone else for life (the omega) and watch his sin for the rest of his life. Dudeee yolka is extreme😭😭sorry for the confusionnnn
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 05:08:33 +0000 UTCThey love money and showing off😂😂😂😂 Andra just come back to show off his boyfriend, his mom is ready to show off yolka to her circle and other SILs!!😂😂😂 i think they're pretty cheap but it's funny hahahha
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 04:56:22 +0000 UTCI'll upload the unused storyboard later as the ref of their interaction. I actually planned to draw the proposal thing, yes!!! It was pretty wholesome scene. I has something to do with ravi's tattoo👀 Ahhh glad to hear that!! Andra's mom is flexible and money-oriented just like his son. Yes money = yes happy😂😂 but there's maybe more... and his little sister is pretty cute. She want the whole family to act polite but she was the first one to be rude to yolka and instigating him. She is in legal/law because she wanted to be able to protect his family😊fairly good and honest bunch!!
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 04:54:02 +0000 UTCyou can already imagine the scene😂😂 dad is scared for his son's life!! Thank you!! Merry christmas and happy new year to you too~~~ I hope so, thanks for the wishes, I hope things are going great for you this 2025 too!
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 04:15:35 +0000 UTCYOU KNOWWW WHAT CAN KILL ANDRA HAHAHAHA
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 04:14:14 +0000 UTCMOM HAS GIVEN THE JUDGEMENT: 🔥🔥YOU ARE GAY🔥🔥😂😂😂 indeed!! You get the point right😂Andra got the shrewdness from his mom but also not as bad as her because he inherited a little chill-faced from the dad! He actually isn't chill at all, look at him almost deleting andra from family registry out of shock and discontentment. Dad is panicky and melancholic, but his face often didn't show anything, I guess andra's customer service smile was the evolution of this😂
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 04:14:02 +0000 UTCMerry christmas and happy new yearrr!! Yes I finally made some progress, my computer break down for a week TT The first one to accept is andra's little brother😂😂 he's cheap about good looking dude like andra. Lil sis is critical and thought andra is a dumb--cough, naive big brother who needs protection because he's bad at it, protecting himself. You're right! I will draw this danger topic in next one, preferably so we can see andra's past. We are on 70th chapter and only know a bit about the protagonist andra 😂😂 Thank youuu!! I drank a lot of water and.. a lot of coffee, make sure you're well-hydrated too💖💖
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 04:00:09 +0000 UTCLMAOOOOO can't you see it already?? andra's forehead is pretty big, he's balding typeee😭😭 it's okay he can go to turkey and receives some hair implant if this happen😂😂 Yolka can't have one peaceful day👍👍 AyYYYY THANK YOUUU!!! I'm becoming more old this year.. YES YESSS I LIKE THE GIFTTT!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! And sorry to hear that, I also had days.. or months like that, ignoring everything and even my friend's chat for 2 weeks before replying just to keep 'you' intact😭😭😭 But i hope you're fine now! Life is hard, let's preserve things that gave us small happiness everyday so we have something to look forward for... Thank you so much for your support and this comments too, I enjoyed reading itttt!!
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 03:34:01 +0000 UTCRight???? It's too good to be true😂😂 Yeah black magic/mystic kinda stuff happens often here, just the other day my mom said her therapist's 4 brother died at same period, one person every month. The therapist anguished and asked a shaman who then said they ate at a popular restaurant that worship a 'thing', and they were chosen as a sacrifice🥲to maintain the restaurant's success🥲the restaurant is in my city. idk if they died because of that or something else. So much dark stories!! Just be careful when you see something is too good, doubt it😂😂
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 03:29:27 +0000 UTCThank you for waiting too and your support! hehehe wait for the finished piece~~
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 03:24:07 +0000 UTCThank you too!! Hahahha yes his first priority if yolka like fishing😂 in the family, both his son didn't like fishing, the daughter does but is very busy now, so he want to know if this son-in-law to be can be a buddy! Ayeee look forwardd, I'm still linearting TwT/
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 03:23:50 +0000 UTCfather be like "hmm. Not bad, you like those, we can go together." isn't men simple like that, same interest =friend😂😂
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 03:22:06 +0000 UTCel papa de andra ya se asusto de que a su hijo le gusten los hombres, y aun mas se asusto de que tenga.. gran amor por su hijo, gran corazon para amar a su hijo, gran---
SUMAJA
2025-01-01 03:21:28 +0000 UTCThe part where Yolka said 'I'M SORRY I CAN'T LEFT ANDRA WITH ALL BECAUSE I HAVE TO SPARE MY PARENTS SOME TO GROOM ANOTHER HEIR.' confused me 😭 but i love where this is going!
XxL
2024-12-30 13:19:38 +0000 UTCAndra and his mom are twins 🤣 the same sentence but different font.
VelBelle
2024-12-30 12:09:02 +0000 UTCCorrection: Daily life of yolka fucking Andra
Nugget Simp
2024-12-30 11:21:09 +0000 UTCThey know priorities well.. or priotitties for andra!😂 he got ‘ah yea whatever will be, will be’ attitude from his mom. His family is actually more female-dominated, with mom being the authoritative figure and his little sister the fierce one! thank youuu happy new year to you too! Hope you enjoyed the last christmas and upcoming new year✨✨🫶
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:19:28 +0000 UTCAndra consented to die from too much fucking, 100%😂😂 i’ll upload the unused storyboard later, but ravi’s trolling actually hurt yolka a lot (because of his jealous nature) but he’ll be healed with andra’s childhood photos😂
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:17:12 +0000 UTCAahh thank youuu😭😭😭🫂 happy new year too youuu hope you have a great days ahead! I have no plan on new year though, maybe just work and eat sumptous dinner😂
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:14:27 +0000 UTCThank you!! Hahaha I will upload the unused storyboard later, this chap should be angsty but I got fed up and decided to go this way aaaa Thank you for your support too! My blessing!
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:11:01 +0000 UTCOmg it’s not that bad, yolka is normal, his size is just normally andra’s upper arm size and length😂😂😂
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:09:49 +0000 UTCYou can probably guess what happen😂😂😂 there is a dumb scene i want to draw for a long time hahahah
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:09:14 +0000 UTCMurderous weapon of Yolka Ivanderson!
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:08:16 +0000 UTCLook at how pale andra’s little bro is😂😂😂
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:07:43 +0000 UTCSo happy to hear that! Wait for the finished versionnn
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:07:06 +0000 UTCHe did nothing wrong, he was just born with the wrong—
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:06:49 +0000 UTCLmao why you guys are soo good, what happen to author giving suprises😭😭🫵🏼
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:06:25 +0000 UTCYes uncle andra already died countless times and returned back because his method of dying is too shameful (fucked to death) and his ancestors kicked him back in😭😭😂😂 THANK YOUUU!!! merry christmast and happy new year too~ yes yes, i can only throw this tiny crumbs🫂🫂
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:05:59 +0000 UTCIt’s troubling that my readers are too good at guessing plots. This author has nothing to surprise you😭😭
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:04:32 +0000 UTCDaily life of yolka fucking up—/no
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:03:52 +0000 UTCHE DIDDD, HE WANTED TO BE ONII-CHAN AND BE CALLED THAT LOLOLOL 😭😭
SUMAJA
2024-12-30 11:03:30 +0000 UTCMaybe we can get some extra content in the future/ bonus chapters of Ravi and Yolka interacting? Maybe we can see the conversation about Andra’s childhood engagement with some jealous passionate holiday sex afterwards? I’m super enjoying this chapter so far!! Excited for Andra’s ‘meet the family’ arc. I love how just like Andra his mum is money focused and is very happy with her new son in law whereas it’s the little sister who is being realistic and protective! Love the dynamic!!
Eva_Blue
2024-12-30 09:33:51 +0000 UTCLet me guess, he accidentally saw the outline of Yolka’s brontosaurus? 🦕 🤣 Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you as well Sumaja!! Hope next year brings you lot of happiness and peace and full wallet. 😉
Nicolette
2024-12-30 07:23:27 +0000 UTCImagina al papá de Andra diciéndole a Yolka “Sácatela y ponla en el centro de la mesa, necesito examinarla.”😭
Ren☆
2024-12-30 06:27:44 +0000 UTCOH MY GOD I NEEEEEEED TO KNOW WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO MAKE THAT ACCUSATION AT THE END COME OUT 😭
Tc
2024-12-30 05:39:10 +0000 UTCstarted fully cackling when i saw the "YOU ARE GAY" meme 😭 also andra having his mom's shrewdness and his dad's chill is adorable
rae of sunshine
2024-12-30 02:21:56 +0000 UTCMerry christmas and happy new year! I’m always hoping a News from this history, Ahaha this is a big update. Lets hope andra’s family be able to accept his new son xD. But I like that his little sis is worried about his big bro. And I think there’s a history about the topic of beign dangerous in his family with the relationships of andra in his past. I’ll hope more. Autor too! Take care your health and done forget to drink water.!
DDC
2024-12-30 00:36:11 +0000 UTCHOW DID HE GET THAT CONCLUSION HHAHAHAHAHA😭😭😭😭, damn everything was going way to good to stay that way I guess, poor yolka…. He deserves it! Also… author I’m begging you, don’t make Andra bald, his hair is the only thing pretty in his head!🤣 Also happy birthdayyyy (and new year) 🎁 here’s my gift, open it *you open it* It’s one more year of supporting your work!! Yay! Okay, I’ll stop, I honestly missed mr beta, I wasn’t in my best and just didn’t feel like it, so I didn’t left any comment or anything, but now I’m back to stay, this story makes me way to happy, and also your comments! So this is always a happy push to keep going, thank you for everything you do 💕
Ren☆
2024-12-29 22:53:07 +0000 UTCMerry Christmas and Happy New Year! In a normal world I think I would be suspicious of Yolka too, like, "It's too good to be true!" As a socioanthropologist I'm also interested in the news, facts and legends you occasionally share about your country (the one about the sacrificial spouses is really creepy).
Valeria Miceli
2024-12-29 22:51:01 +0000 UTCOMG YES HAHA 😂
Bailey Gaccione
2024-12-29 22:06:07 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapte
Fatihah Fatinah
2024-12-29 21:51:21 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter, Sumaja. Love the dads questions, very typical dad energy. 😂 I can only imagine how the next few sceens will play out. I'll be eagerly waiting the finished update, and next chapter. In the mean time, I'll read it from the beginning.
KronicKay
2024-12-29 21:10:34 +0000 UTCOmg!! I need the next chapter!! I loved how the father just accepted him 😊
Bryana Vasquez
2024-12-29 20:46:22 +0000 UTCEstoy 100% segura que el papá de Andra vio la “yolkaconda” Y SE ASUSTÓ, es que también. Quien no se asustaría?
Victoria
2024-12-29 20:25:32 +0000 UTCAndra and his Mom crack me up! 😆 Can't wait to see what happens next!! I hope you're enjoying the holidays!! ❤️☃️
Lee118j
2024-12-29 20:21:27 +0000 UTCAhahahahaha! Pretty sure Andra already agreed to that😂 you could have Ravi teasing Yolka with childhood photos in an extra later.
Sheila
2024-12-29 19:23:12 +0000 UTCAaaahh, I feel so full after this. Just what I need to go into the nee year with a smile. Thank you Sumaja, Happy New Year and have a wonderful time with your familly and loved ones.🥳💕💕🥳
Condruz Irina
2024-12-29 19:13:28 +0000 UTCThis chapter was hilarious 😂 Thank you so much for your hard work and blessing us with this before the new year.
Kit
2024-12-29 19:07:14 +0000 UTCPLEASE let the worry about killing Andra be because Yolka’s dick is the size of Andra’s entire thigh 😂😂
Luna Lena
2024-12-29 19:07:01 +0000 UTCi wonder what yolka said or did for uncle to freak out like that HDHAHSHAHAHA
Ma Ri
2024-12-29 18:51:54 +0000 UTCLol with that massive Willie. 🤣🤣🤣
walter boyd
2024-12-29 18:30:41 +0000 UTCLMFAOOOOO DID THEY CATCH A GLIMPSE OF YOLKAS 'WEAPON'
Jewel
2024-12-29 18:28:37 +0000 UTCOMG. love it
Yane Estevez Rosario
2024-12-29 18:25:31 +0000 UTCWhat in the world did Yolka do this time
Nickle's Nickel
2024-12-29 18:21:38 +0000 UTCI bet yolka asked him for andra's hand and he freaked out LMAO either that or someone felt him up and saw the d size 😭
Xue
2024-12-29 18:20:43 +0000 UTC'He's gonna kill Andra' - sorry sire, Andra died and gone to heaven too many times to count 😌😌💦💦 ALSO!! MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU, SUMAJA! Thank you for updating this WIP, dropping such a present on us! 🎁🎁 (I'm desperate for crumbs)
Lythrium
2024-12-29 18:20:04 +0000 UTCOh no, did they discover the size of his third arm?
brusicor02
2024-12-29 18:16:15 +0000 UTCYolka what did you say? Oh oh
Nugget Simp
2024-12-29 18:13:54 +0000 UTCNOT YOLKA WANTING TO BE ONII-CHAN HELPS
Lythrium
2024-12-29 18:09:27 +0000 UTC
