[WIP] Chapter 69 Part 2
Added 2024-11-01 05:23:23 +0000 UTCThis is the WIP! I'll finish it in a few days hopefully, the balloon hasn't been fixed so please look forward to the finished result👁️👁️
one like to deceive and one is willing to be deceived. The onlooker (us) can only shake our head watching them performing two-person-world play, we are only furnitures...
In this stage I should be finishing this in a few days. Please look forward to it, and thank you~~~
Comments
Omg his jealousy is scary and adorable at the same time 😂😂😂😂
Shiva7757
2025-02-21 20:18:06 +0000 UTCtoo bad, I want that too actually but if we draw more nsfw the plot is not going anywhere sobbbss😭😭 i need more timeee in the worldddd
SUMAJA
2024-11-18 19:58:26 +0000 UTCthe complete chap is uppp!!
SUMAJA
2024-11-18 19:57:55 +0000 UTClmao yeah his head is good like that, he will use all card on his hand to get what he wants!!😂😂
SUMAJA
2024-11-18 19:57:47 +0000 UTCPretty sure Andra would be on board with that plan
Mars Phoenix
2024-11-16 09:35:47 +0000 UTCWell what else does one need? 🤔
Mars Phoenix
2024-11-16 09:35:01 +0000 UTCThis is the man who learned very quickly that his face and body are the best way to get what he wants lol
Sheila
2024-11-07 23:41:21 +0000 UTC😆😆😆💕
Karen Sida
2024-11-05 20:26:17 +0000 UTCNgl though… I was kinda hoping for a continuation of the NSFW scene in the last part.
Nicolette
2024-11-03 06:44:41 +0000 UTCBwahahahahaha…. Omgosh that was awesome!! 🤣😆🤣Yolka knows exactly how to play Andra. I’m thinking that Andra also knows that he’s being played but goes along with it anyway because he loves it. 🤣😆🤣 These two are adorkable!! I love it!! I needed the laugh. Thanks Sumaja!! ❤️
Nicolette
2024-11-03 00:08:05 +0000 UTCAN-AN YOU DUMMY HE'S JUST ACTING!! CAN'T YOU SEE IT??? I THOUGHT YOU WERE QUITE BRIGHT????? --ravi,probably. he's now concerned because before he only afraid yolka acting violent to andra, now he see he is also acting manipulative and shamelessly selling cuteness (which andra ate!! looool) ravi fear andra will be eaten alive by this man lmaoooo
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 21:24:35 +0000 UTCYay!! Look forward to the finished chapppp
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 21:22:46 +0000 UTCOh yeaahhhh happy anniversary!!!! I'm just coughing now and eating the meds to recover faster. Yeah, just hope if they are. It's kinda weird seeing homophobia in omegaverse setting but I think for betas, since their society mirroring us this is a relevant situation🥲He always have a little low self esteem because of this too, since he couldn't have offspring with yolka as a beta male, he is always less favorable than a male omega (since his society's norm is to have offspring)😭😭
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 21:22:34 +0000 UTCRavi just needs to bring it up during dinner. Where Andra can't just stop him or run.
Alyssa Eidem
2024-11-02 20:41:16 +0000 UTCHAHAHAHAH YEAHHHHHH😂😂😂😂 the same creepy tongue face!!
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 20:37:51 +0000 UTCHe is too blind, blud is far too gone now😭😭
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 20:32:21 +0000 UTCright? He is more suitable to be a fox😂😂😂 I thought he was a wolf-like man, but turns out he's a fox demon now!
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 20:27:03 +0000 UTCOh hell yeah👀👀 actually I wanted yolka to know too... and make world burns again🔥🔥🔥
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 20:26:09 +0000 UTCYesss wait a little bit!! I actually wanted to show them a bit while they are calling andra (in part 1, you can see the unused storyboard at the end of the chapter), but i decided to be against it😂 but he is indeed, in the family, considered the black sheep of three siblings. What you said is 100% what happen, he moved away to bigger city to do something and not being nagged by his parents😂😂😂😂 I already got a scene where they finally meet!! Yolka will indeed impress them with his big..... bank account!! and brick //no
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 20:25:28 +0000 UTCright? a lot of us prefer to be home with great wifi and delicious food and snack nowadays than going out😂
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 20:02:44 +0000 UTCyolka and andra be like, we know yolka is toxic but andra is like the MC of "I parry everything!" or "apothecary diaries", they found poison delicious and wanted more!!!🤣🤣
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 20:01:00 +0000 UTChe might be color blind ORRRRRR.... he just loves red!💃😂😂😂
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 19:59:17 +0000 UTCLmaooo yeessss love is blindness, to love is to be blind😂😂at least for yolka and andra hahahahaha!! one like to be deceitful (innocently) and one is willing to be deceived (innocently), so all is well, they are a great match💃💃and yes yolka now know andra is not too good with his head, so action is better than just mere word!!
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 19:58:57 +0000 UTCRavi actually don't think andra is weak, he just feeling concerned because yolka look so possessive😂 he damn well know andra won't wrong himself, he just afraid andra is fooled.. WHICH HE IS!!
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 19:56:48 +0000 UTCI'm drawing that pouty face while cursing yolka, this shameless man, you're almost 2 meters tall and 3 decades old, yet still dare to put this kind of face to curry pity from andra!! 😂😂😂 ravi just know yolka for a while but he already shocked because how different the face he put on him and on andra!!
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 19:42:33 +0000 UTCAyeee I'm coloring it right now, look forwarddddd💨💨 yolka know andra too much, his study of andra has reached advanced level that he can take the best strategy to make andra pick his side😂😂
SUMAJA
2024-11-02 19:40:37 +0000 UTCI can't wait for the finished product. Omg the spiciness of yolka and the naivety of Andra. My mouth is watering for more.
Ashley M Rench
2024-11-02 03:50:44 +0000 UTCI think A LOT of us wouldn’t mind it if that’s included in the perks lmao.
Sr Dede
2024-11-01 22:25:00 +0000 UTCHAHAHA! Omg the animal ears and that pouty face!!! That alone makes me hide all the red flags!!! Death by snu -snu!!!🚩🚩🚩🚩🤣😂🥰 PS: Also Ravi’s face?! Priceless!!
Sr Dede
2024-11-01 22:19:35 +0000 UTCLove it! But also it also makes me laugh how people think that andra is so week, it would be fun to see the face of brother if he found out that yolka was beaten by him 🤣
Zuly Ramírez
2024-11-01 17:21:23 +0000 UTC.... As they say "Love is blind" but.... for them it should be "Love is blindness" However, What matters here is that they both love the good and bad of each other and ease things with communication.... or for Yolka now ease things up with actions..
MB
2024-11-01 14:20:05 +0000 UTCYolka is literally the embodiment of red flag behavior but Andra loves it so much, he might be color blind.
TheNameless
2024-11-01 13:33:54 +0000 UTCHahahahahahaha I'm dying, Andra have a 9 tail fox as a boyfriend 😂😂😂 i know he's toxic but still I support Yolka
Margarita
2024-11-01 10:31:53 +0000 UTCI absolutely love the Andra backstory! Can’t wait to meet his family more!! (Although from part 1 I was wondering if we’d get a spicy scene! Maybe it will come after Ravi teases Yolka some more) Ravi totally clocked Andra is also a weirdo in love 😂 We know from Andra’s smut he likes a harsh possessive Alpha but for Ravi it’s new news. Makes sense that Andra is a bit of a black sheep in the family. Sounds like he’s moved away to the big city on his own with a mid level job and writes smut all day 😂 He’s living his best live but maybe it’s not what his parents expected. Wonder what they’ll make of the big alpha! I’m sure Yolka will impress them when they find out he has a really big… bank account!
Eva_Blue
2024-11-01 09:39:33 +0000 UTCI like the hint that subconsciously Ravi was Andra's first crush. Even though he didn't do anything about it, he obviously didn't hide it well. It's probably why his type is big male Alphas.
Alyssa Eidem
2024-11-01 08:24:57 +0000 UTCThe idea of Yolka being a fox makes much more sense than a lion when it comes to Andra 🤣🤣🤣
ScaryGodLover
2024-11-01 06:53:11 +0000 UTCI LOVE how Yolka switched characters in a beat and Andre didn’t notice lol
Bryana Vasquez
2024-11-01 06:33:06 +0000 UTCWasn't expecting the proof that Ravi and Andra are related to be the creepy tongue face 😭
Hannah S
2024-11-01 06:11:42 +0000 UTCI just got done with anniversary fun with my husband and got on my computer to see this. It's the best Hallowversary ever. I hope the author is doing well and that Andra's family is not too homophobic.
Katherine Griffith
2024-11-01 06:02:11 +0000 UTCEXACTLY HAHAHAHHAHA yolka actually has a lot of red flag but andra loves red😂😂😂 he even said once he didn't mind yolka lock him up with wifi and snacks😂
SUMAJA
2024-11-01 06:01:30 +0000 UTCWe're so blinded by the BL rose glasses that we cant see exactly how toxic Yolka can be, looking objectively. Ravi's take is so refreshing and id like to see other prospectives like this and how yolka and andra address it
Nichy
2024-11-01 05:43:52 +0000 UTCWow! Just in time for my lunch break!
No I said NO.
2024-11-01 05:40:18 +0000 UTCBrother Ravi could NOT believe his damn eyes 😭 he's like "WHO IS THIS?? WHO IS THIS CRYBABY MAN?? AN-AN YOU ARE BING FOOLED!!!"
Jewel
2024-11-01 05:37:20 +0000 UTC
