Chapter 67 Part 1 : Vacation Together
Added 2024-07-21 10:44:54 +0000 UTCEdit: It's now proofed! Thank you my dear editor Ayanna for helping~~
Warning: Too few panel. I hit some writing wall again and frustrated because just to draw one plot point and connecting it to last cliffhanger (chapter 65? 63? on the plane) already fill up 15 panels😭 I won't do it again, just go with forward pacing.... no going back in time, I was wrong o)---(
Anyway, I upload some here to show I made some progress and not procrastinating 🙇♀️🙇♀️
Yeah, this is a filler chapter.. That's right😭😭😭
What's the plot point?! I missed the time where I can push 4 plot points in one chapter (40 panel).
Where did my skill gone??? This must be because author is a single dog who made romance story and have no idea what will happen once the character is dating. Is that why everything is blank?! Are dating people talking about meme and weather everyday? I don't know. I think of completing the story then when I see again..
The green one is the plot point that was done (after ch 30). There's so much more to draw but how to cram them quickly and effectively like before hjhjahgfjahsfkjashf😭😭😭😭😭Me want fast pacedddd storeyyyyyy
So yeah. Until I get back my former cramming storytelling skill I can only wrong you and let you read fairly slow story🥹 Please be patient with me ;w;/
I will edit and proofread the chapter after the full chapter is completed. Next part maybe uploaded next week!
Look forward~~
Comments
What language do Andra and Yolka speak normally?
Pinklemonadegirl18
2025-01-29 08:02:29 +0000 UTCThey're in business class! New route, no first class yet, only economy and business✨ (no this is just author make reasoning because author never ride a first, nor a business, and can't find the asset so just.. just accept they are in business class😭😭)
SUMAJA
2024-08-20 06:43:07 +0000 UTCLMAOOOOO Next time i'll draw dignity returning and then left again immediately, following his friend "shame"🤣🤣🤣 I also forget this scene!
SUMAJA
2024-08-20 06:41:17 +0000 UTCAaa thank you so much for your support and patience😭😭😭😭 And for the kind comments too!! Yes andra always have a low self esteem but usually he is too lazy to care about it. But in front of yolka and other people talking, it resurfaced again🥲🥲 andra, you're fine..
SUMAJA
2024-08-20 06:40:33 +0000 UTCHe didn't have anything, maybe after this he'll be braver since nothing will be lost anymore (probably the best case)🤣
SUMAJA
2024-08-20 06:39:20 +0000 UTCThank you so muchhh >w</
SUMAJA
2024-08-20 06:38:47 +0000 UTCYes after this!! We go that wayyy
SUMAJA
2024-08-20 06:38:40 +0000 UTCThis is probably a silly question, but are Andra and Yolka in first class or economy class?
Nickle's Nickel
2024-08-14 04:09:29 +0000 UTCI had to re-read the last chapter to remember what happened. I wasn't disappointed. Panels I loved this time: Andra's blushy face seeing sleeping Yolka. Andra holding Yolka's hand while asleep. Yolka's tender gaze towards Andra nearly killed me. I'm also surprised "dignity" personified hasn't packed up and left just like Andra's "shame."
MichiTheThird
2024-07-31 01:59:19 +0000 UTCThere was a time when I had to stop paying because of problems I had with patreon and patience became my friend so it's really no problem if you take a while to move forward, I love this story so much that I can reread it a thousand times and the thousand times I will feel the same emotion. I read it in English, in Spanish.... It doesn't matter I just love it. Btw these last chapters remind me of the first ones where Andra wasn't feeling really pretty and is looking at herself in the bathroom mirror, I like that you don't forget the detail that Andra has self esteem problems.... Cheer up Andra
Jane Solis
2024-07-27 15:59:24 +0000 UTCAndra has no dignity left for sure
TeenyMartini
2024-07-25 18:48:18 +0000 UTCThank you so much and I hope you are having an amazing day when you see this!
Bearyboring
2024-07-25 06:58:30 +0000 UTCHey, we haven't met any of Andra's family yet. If you're looking for drama in an established relationship, that could be a source.
Katherine Griffith
2024-07-23 21:34:10 +0000 UTCLMAOOOOOO YOU READ THAT RIGHT HAHAHAHHAHA I will have that scene drawn for sure, yolka and his titty pride and andra's fascination in titties😂😂 he feel competitive for sure, he has to have best and bigger tits so andra can be satisfied with his!! so silly HAHAHAHAH actually yolka didn't call his mom, but his mom calls him periodically (this time maybe she want to ask about vacation) and he told her they are in hospital, she panicked and go with dad🤣 yes i haven't seen you in a while, I hope things will be better to you and you can be happier too🥹 I'll work hard to make a fun chapter too!! and thank you for your kind consideration aaaaaa😭😭😭
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 10:10:04 +0000 UTCI won't stop, I still need to draw and still have to keep my promise of finishing this story 🥹🥹🥹 I knowww, I've seen your name for a long time and you've been supporting me for so long! Thank you very much for your considerate words, appreciate it a lot😂 yolka is fine, even if he die from waiting he'll still snu snu andra in his ghost form. Thank youuuu
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 09:58:36 +0000 UTCAAAA thank youuu!!(;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) I want to be fast though ;w;/ but you are right, they are being young, dumb and in love😂 after finally find each other!! Thank you, I'll accept your money happily too!!
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 09:56:21 +0000 UTCThank you!! We can now go back to the plot >w</ Aaaaa thank you so much!
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 09:22:25 +0000 UTCI think you're great. I'm struggling with just 17 chapters of a webnovel. I lack focus and discipline. Plus I'm not sure my story is good enough. So you see you're already well ahead of me. But don't be hard on yourself, as the old saying goes "Rome wasn't built in a day". You got this. Be more patient and gentle with you r self
Ashley M Rench
2024-07-23 08:24:42 +0000 UTCTTATT thank you!!! I like it when it's fast paced too. But yeah, I wish it to still feel complete and not too weird to read. Thank you so much for this comment TTwTT/
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 07:53:43 +0000 UTCLMAOOO GINORMOUS PEPE INDEEEDD 🤣🤣🤣 don't worry, andra is protected by ✨yaoi plot armor✨
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 07:51:28 +0000 UTCThank youuu!!
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 07:43:33 +0000 UTCThank youuuu, i like drawing yolka's soft soft face indeed 🥹🥹 Lmaooo yes, I think so too, i haven't written established couple stories until now and quite at loss🥲 Thank youuu!! You too, stay healthy and happyyyy💕💕💕
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 07:41:34 +0000 UTCI'm also sad 😭😭😭I used to finish one chapter in 3 days, this feels like you slowly lost your skill and you don't know why and how to regain it aaaaaaaaaa Lmaoooo author will become AI first if i want to be able to get one chapter per day 😂 or have a content factory (I used to work at Korean content factory, they can spit one chapter per day but nobody is drawing, just copy paste thing like sticker) Yes I want to make sure you guy can't get any more disappointed with me by being real 😂
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 07:23:24 +0000 UTCAAAAA TTATT Thank youuu aaaaaa o)----(
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 07:15:08 +0000 UTCLmaooo I will continue as long as possible then 😂 But i'm still working on to get my old skills back!! Andra is protected with his yaoi plot armot, just physically, mentally he's been damaged a lot lmaoooo but hopefully he have fun!
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 07:01:30 +0000 UTCThank youuu TT TT i still hope to make fun story though. I want to get my old skill backkkk o)--( He is!! Andra actually know yolka is just doing the best for him but still feel resentful and humiliated (even though his shame is already gone, his dignity follow suit now(・∀・)
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 06:33:14 +0000 UTC'yolkasaurus in all it's glory' HAHAHAHAHAHAH WHAT 😂
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 06:15:02 +0000 UTCI was struggling so hard trying to read that plot ideas🤣 Lmao yolka jealous because Andra could see someone else tits😂😂😂
Ren☆
2024-07-23 06:05:53 +0000 UTCI love them so muchhhhh they’re so silly, poor Andra he’s always buried in shame, no surprises here 😭 I started reading the chapter and closed the app immediately when I saw he was on the hospital because of…that. 🤣🤣 If Andra’s embarrassed, I am too. I can imagine yolka almost in tears calling his mommy because he broke his precious bunny I haven’t commented in a while because I wasn’t feeling my best but you’re always on time to make me feel better, thank you, hope you’re doing good💕 I’ll always wait for you
Ren☆
2024-07-23 06:03:26 +0000 UTCTT TT most of the time it's just me being disappointed with myself. I still have fun doing it but it wasn't as the quality i wanted it to be TwT I now understand why so many series, esp Korean one, has this certain development where it's: great beginning -> great/okay development ->flop/anticlimactic ending. I guess things just get harder the more it goes on, but lots of author doesn't have this problem and stay great all season, I wish to be like them TT__TT
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 05:37:40 +0000 UTCAndra was resentful but he also know yolka is doing the best for himself, he just don't approve how he did thing and what he made andra do 😂 stahppppp your parents doesn't need to know!!
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 05:34:55 +0000 UTCAAAA thank youuu!! Glad to hear that! I want to draw fun story ;w;/
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 05:33:57 +0000 UTCHe would want to, but he was dragged to airport the next day and he now want to jump out of plane and just ✨disappear✨
SUMAJA
2024-07-23 05:33:38 +0000 UTCI don’t care how long I have to wait or how slowly I have to read Author! As long as you do not stop writing and take care of your health I’m happy. I’ve been here since chapter 10 so what’s waiting a little more. It won’t kill me. Yolka might die from waiting to snu snu Andra 😂 Anyway I love you Author!!! Keep up the good work!!! 🫶
Stephanie Music
2024-07-22 15:52:55 +0000 UTCI really love this the way it is. The timing is what the characters need so it's ok if it's slow sometimes. I need more of andra and yolka just being young, dumb and in love!! Dont worry if you think it's filler, I love it either way!!! I will give you my money happily!!
Fernanda Solares
2024-07-22 14:35:10 +0000 UTCI'm pleased with how the resolution of the cliffhanger is coming together. thank you dear author!
AA
2024-07-22 14:30:28 +0000 UTCWith the story slowing down a bit I think it’s bringing us in as readers to their honeymoon phase. I love when it’s fast paced too but you’re doing a great job as is and the story still feels complete
Esmeralda Vigil
2024-07-22 07:11:59 +0000 UTCmama yolka. . . Accidents do happen UwU specially if it is a ginormous like your son's pepe UwU prayers to Andra's colon and ass.
MB
2024-07-22 00:36:05 +0000 UTCi liked this.
sanaenam
2024-07-22 00:23:32 +0000 UTCYolka's face is just so soft, your expression game is soo strong! And I totally get you with the "what do couples do"...I think they do the same things they do during dating time, just with more certainty 🙂↕️ you got this...stay healthy and happy, my dear 💛
justatrainwreck
2024-07-21 22:32:05 +0000 UTCI would be lying if I wasn’t a little sad that the progress is slow but also- I love your work so much I don’t really care either haha! I probably won’t be satisfied if you cranked out a chapter a day hehe. Do whatever you need to do :) you don’t over promise anything and you communicate with us. Appreciate you and love your work!!!
Mickey
2024-07-21 19:44:53 +0000 UTCI love your work,and your readers can see your effort 🥰
JETWOLF
2024-07-21 17:42:28 +0000 UTCYou got this, author!! I want this story to last as long as possible so I don’t mind if it moves slow! But thank you for working hard and hope you get rest too!💕p.s. im glad Andra wasn’t truly hurt and maybe he can find his dignity on this trip and the two can enjoy their vacation!☺️😂
Bella
2024-07-21 16:18:07 +0000 UTCSlow, yes, but sometimes it's what is needed. So much has happened to them so fast, and maybe they need a little slow burn and cozy time just to be together. I'm so happy to see them happy now. It looks like Andra's dignity was hurt more than anything else, thank goodness.
Katherine Griffith
2024-07-21 14:35:35 +0000 UTCThank you for your hardwork 💜 We all love your story and will happily wait, it takes time to perfectly draw Yolksaurus in all it's glory 😂
Krysia Browne
2024-07-21 13:57:53 +0000 UTCIt's alright. Just calm, deep breathes, and you got this. I don't think any of us are worried about pacing. We all love your story and will be fine with waiting. This stuff ain't easy to do. So take your time and don't stress. Trust me it's worth the wait And i feel bad for andra's ass. Yolka really did a number on him
Ashley M Rench
2024-07-21 13:04:01 +0000 UTCAww the end is so cute where Andra is holding Yolka's hand 😍 I laughed so much at Andra remembering everything and the "gush" 🤣 That Yolka has some making up to do!!
Lee118j
2024-07-21 12:54:49 +0000 UTCI love these two! No matter how long it’s been since I’ve read their story I always come back
Dynasti
2024-07-21 12:50:19 +0000 UTCAaaaahhhhhhh, out of shame I think I would have dug a hole and buried myself in it! 🕳️
Valeria Miceli
2024-07-21 12:50:01 +0000 UTCHe has nothing but himself, no dignity, no shame, nothing😭 poor guy
SUMAJA
2024-07-21 12:12:18 +0000 UTCHe wake up not only with empty balls but also empty dignity. With his boyfriend's parents know and visit him and concerned about him😭😭 he didn't sign up for this!!
SUMAJA
2024-07-21 12:11:56 +0000 UTCYes! Hoping it will be soon😂 look forwardddd
SUMAJA
2024-07-21 12:10:52 +0000 UTCNo dignity, dignity sold for extra life after every session with yolkasaurus😭😭 yess!! Thank you, I will work harddddd like yolkasaurus🫶🙇♀️✨
SUMAJA
2024-07-21 12:10:28 +0000 UTCAaa thank you!! Look forward to the next oneeee💕💕💕
SUMAJA
2024-07-21 12:09:39 +0000 UTCI can't... I just can't 😂😂😂😂 poor Andra
Margarita
2024-07-21 11:30:27 +0000 UTCLMAO so that's why he's really pissed 🤣 💀 And I would be too if I had a hospital document stating all that 😭💀
Kit
2024-07-21 11:09:48 +0000 UTCThank you ! I can't wait to read the full chapter. I hope to see them sort out their misunderstanding. I want to see them being lovey-dovey again.
Kev
2024-07-21 11:08:22 +0000 UTCYolkasaurus won't let anything get in its way. Even if it's Anya's dignity rippp 💀 Fighting!!! Thankyou for this WIP (it's like an oasis for this parched reader)
Lythrium
2024-07-21 11:07:22 +0000 UTCThis was so cute! I love this WIP so much!
Lmerc1101
2024-07-21 10:57:17 +0000 UTC
