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Map of Purgatory - Day 500

The map of Purgatory on Day 500 I made for reference.

Map of Purgatory - Day 500

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Yeah i was not knowing if its was wanted and prepared by you (and i pierced maybe something and a possibility of Clarissa scheming for this Brotel placement here that you hint really sneakely :P with how well everything is done and thinked that was showing in my view) or it was just little idea not seen/overlooked (everyone have little blind spot overlooked at some point) little idea that you can pick for later change/use maybe I like a lot how you seem to organize thing and create thing covering basically every aspect thinkable and that people in the story change things and their "procedure" each time, really realy realist and solid progression (on multiple aspect and different subject) created by multiple view of character who do thing differently and when new problem appear they experience it and adapt things and themselve, this is quite amazing and one of the very strong point of the story who is done silently in the backstage of it in my view :)

Zarik0

All correct, but that is one of the downsides of Clarissa controlling everything. Not a mistake, but not efficient for military purposes. Efficient for city planning purposes. This is the small mindset between an administrator versus a general.

Mister Vii

Hmm seem good, i see just one weakness (maybe another little one) -First the Treasury with the Fast Reaction Building, good together but the problem is the brotel who is just beside them (this is a security risk, people can use it to sniff and look about the treasury and the rotation of guard or etc without much suspicion (so remplacing it by a barrack of the RMPF is way better) The brotel can be put on the south of the 3rd street (Possibility its a trap done by the high people (Clarissa and RMPF) in control, this brotel is with informant and spy girl who pay good attention to this aspect, so possibility to sniff out criminal eyeing the treasury and looking about it and using this brotel, like a bait to sniff thing and people in advance :P) Second little thing is the Regional Map who will have People Location Tracker and/or etc at some point, this thing need to be beside the RMPF HQ and together with, the general or commanding officier is here with the command and surveillance staff and look at thing with this map, also the Communication Stone room together i guess, this need to be consolidated into one building block to have a proper communication and surveillance and command function of the Army, a real HQ and commanding node The shield building is also better to be together with HQ, so as to react fast if thing are detected by scout and stone communication and need to be activated fast These thing are defense building node and need link between them (the faster the better, response time and etc with order) and need to be used together for practicality and efficiency

Zarik0

Thanks for the catch. I copy paste from previous posts to keep the format the same.

Mister Vii

Chapter title says day 350

Cirex123

City shield will be explained tomorrow. The meditation building is basically for people who want to sit someplace quietly and reflect. Basically an extension of mental health. Not everyone wants casinos or brothels to unwind, even if it is the vast majority of people. Even then, sometimes people need something different.

Mister Vii

I noticed the City shield and meditation hall on North street. What do they do?

Simyian


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