Brother Bewitched 32
Added 2024-02-24 02:58:38 +0000 UTCAsryn struggles with how to act around his now beautiful and female friend. Serren makes a shocking request.
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Not yet! Soon!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-03-05 12:27:21 +0000 UTCWill serrens father be in the next chapter?
Joseph c guillory
2024-03-05 08:09:44 +0000 UTCYou are welcome, and as always thanks for being a fan of Brother Bewitched all these years.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-03-02 12:17:17 +0000 UTCThank you for telling me I appreciate your response and I look forward to next chapter.
Joseph c guillory
2024-03-02 06:44:27 +0000 UTCI understand your point. Partly, it has to do with a writerly decision. The story is already pretty long, so I don’t want to bring in any more complications. Right now, Serena just has to decide which boy to pick!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-03-02 02:13:02 +0000 UTCI accidentally deleted your comment! Sorry about that! Response below!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-03-02 02:09:32 +0000 UTCAny responses?
Joseph c guillory
2024-03-02 01:22:07 +0000 UTCJoseph c guillory
2024-02-29 19:21:57 +0000 UTCMost of the nobles are terrified Pattenia will put them in dresses, and since she has promised Serren to Runtick they are staying away!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-02-29 11:10:47 +0000 UTCWonderful story as always And it appears there is another suitor was a young princess But i'm surprised no Are there nobles are after her or slavery for that Matter. They would probably see her as Valuable prize to their collection.
Joseph c guillory
2024-02-29 03:59:34 +0000 UTCLOL. Love the term "booby trap" for Serren's manipulations. Thanks for the comments, and for noting the graphics. That has been something I've been working to keep improving!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-02-25 02:01:20 +0000 UTCYour excellent work continues! I love to discover the story details contained within the graphics solely! Serena is continuing to become more beautiful and desirable physically. Her rump is at a "J-Lo-esque" level and, wow, that tiny waist!! Page #5 shows us how much Serena has been feminized at the subconscious level. That's how a classy lady of the court would reflexively comport herself whilst seated! The conscious mental changes are apparent, too. Compare Serena's posture on page #5 to page #10. After realizing that her "King" shtick wasn't getting the desired response from Asryn, she then started to push her chest out, putting her rather ample "pecs" into play. Asryn, with so much blood rapidly exiting his brain for his nether regions, was totally ensnared by Serena's "Booby Trap" when he swore that open-ended oath to her...
findesiecle
2024-02-25 00:54:06 +0000 UTCThanks for the comment and glad you liked it! I spent a bit of time revising and reshooting some scenes trying to get it right! Things are racing forward!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-02-24 14:30:48 +0000 UTCSo good 😊👍 The plot is progressing in the most dramatic way. We see the passions clashing : hunger for power, love, shame, pride. Destiny is in progress. About Asryn, my heart tells me that his fate is sealed.
Alexia
2024-02-24 08:28:45 +0000 UTC
