Brother Bewitched 30
Added 2024-01-12 07:04:48 +0000 UTCAfter losing his virginity as a female, Serren suffers regret and confusion. Nemeria determines to get to the truth.
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Hey, Joseph-- remember, it was not just a night with a man. It was a night with Devin! The next chapter will be out Friday. Now that I have my computer back, I am getting the last shots done, then edit... edit... edit...
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-01-24 04:51:30 +0000 UTCWow a real shocker one Night with a man and she's a different person Great story as always but please tell me when the next chapter is coming out.
Joseph c guillory
2024-01-24 04:15:30 +0000 UTCLOL! I will do my best.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-01-19 16:08:50 +0000 UTCLet's assume you have a good fashion sense. It cannot be otherwise, it's your duty. For your stories, your characters and your audience.
Alexia
2024-01-19 08:52:08 +0000 UTCThank you so much.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-01-16 18:12:48 +0000 UTCgreat job
Joe Blow78
2024-01-16 13:19:13 +0000 UTCThank you!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-01-13 18:32:25 +0000 UTCAs for the dresses, two things. 1. I am not known for my fashion sense! 2. What I didn’t like was as much the way it renders. I felt the pleat like lines on the skirt looked odd in particular, so it was more not liking that more so than the dress itself. I was drawn to it by those multi colored puff sleeves.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-01-13 18:31:50 +0000 UTCWell, thank you very much! I do spend a bit of time on the poses and facial expressions!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-01-13 18:26:47 +0000 UTCThanks! Glad you liked it!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-01-13 18:25:48 +0000 UTCAwesome as always. Love your work Taylor.
Neha Raj
2024-01-13 18:01:40 +0000 UTCNemeria and Serenina look was OK in this episode. Very feminine. IMO, Serenina's dress, hairstyle and make up was the best since a while. So I was surprised by Serenina's derogative comment about her dress..
Alexia
2024-01-13 10:52:25 +0000 UTCYes. The dialog was enough. I 100% agree with findesiecle. 👍 Also Serenina manierisms speak a lot. The way she plays withe her hair or look at herself in the mirror, all that says 'girl' whatever she is saying herself at that moment.
Alexia
2024-01-13 10:47:16 +0000 UTCBravo! Cannot wait for the next one!
Kathleen collins
2024-01-13 08:03:07 +0000 UTCThanks. I resisted the urge to have the narrator explain everything and hope the words were enough. Looks like they did the trick!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-01-13 04:02:49 +0000 UTCBlurring the meanings of yes and no, playing at games of the heart, reaching out to a guy who is "just a good friend", feigning virtue with a confidant and wanting to "spice up" what is reflected back in the mirror... As, I stated before, I enjoy it when the personality changes really start to kick in. Loved it!
findesiecle
2024-01-13 03:10:45 +0000 UTC
