Brother Bewitched 29
Added 2023-12-22 05:00:06 +0000 UTCSerren faces the emotional fallout of having given himself to Devin. His former rival reveals his plans for Serren.
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Hey, Isolo-- Not at all. I just posted Chapter 34!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-03-25 12:31:03 +0000 UTCIs this discontinued?
lsolo
2024-03-25 11:15:40 +0000 UTCHey, Joseph. I am shooting for this Friday (1/12).
Taylor Galen Kadee
2024-01-11 02:57:44 +0000 UTCPlease tell me when the next Chapter is coming out.
Joseph c guillory
2024-01-11 01:47:31 +0000 UTCMerry Christmas to you as well! Thanks for your support!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-12-26 03:38:11 +0000 UTCThanks! I’m glad you liked it. I’m going to have to get more confident with my sex scene making! You and others want more! There will be more! The wizard is fine. Devin just decided to claim Serren as his woman and doesn’t want him to get changed back!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-12-26 03:37:26 +0000 UTCMerry Christmas thank for a good year of story's
Joseph c guillory
2023-12-26 02:51:59 +0000 UTCWonderful plot serenina was finally Taken hard buy a man and And what a powerful man Devin has become I was hoping to see more sex Scenes But this is nice But I wonder what happened to the wizard is he dead in prison? This is a wonderful christian present thank you for it and please keep up the good work.
Joseph c guillory
2023-12-25 06:18:09 +0000 UTCThank you so much!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-12-25 04:46:36 +0000 UTCThis was an early, wonderful Christmas present! Excellent work! Page #26...I love when the mental/personality changes start to kick in.
findesiecle
2023-12-25 02:53:16 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it. It was fun to create this scene both in terms of the sex montage and Devin taking ownership of "his girl." I can't believe my brain glitched like that. The Prett name just leaked into the story somehow. I'll have to go back and fix that!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-12-24 15:38:56 +0000 UTCNooooooo! I need your feedback now! LOL. Glad you liked it. We'll see. As mentioned above, i don't have a lot of confidence when it comes to intimate scenes, but maybe I will look for some examples to inspire me.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-12-24 15:36:40 +0000 UTCIt's a great episode: at least Serenina is taken by a guy! Note that we had expected it all along the novel version (3 books...) and it just NEVER happened. So it's immensely satisfying to see Seren at least surrendering to a guy. And what a guy! I just ❤️ Devin's character, he is more manly of any of your male characters I can think about. I have noted that Devin is called 'Prett' by Nina. Prett is the name of the twisted guy who assaulted her in the novel version. In the comic book context, it is probably Devin's nickname, isn't it?
Alexia
2023-12-24 10:46:42 +0000 UTCWell said, I fully agree... 👍 Keep going and merry Christmas 🎄🎁
Alexia
2023-12-24 10:32:54 +0000 UTCI wish I had joined this group a year later. I simply cannot take the suspense! Another amazing episode. I wish we get to see more intimacy between Nina and Devin. I wouldn't mind a chapter entirely dedicated on this. Keep going Taylor. Merry Christmas 🎄🎁
Neha Raj
2023-12-23 21:39:47 +0000 UTCThanks! I don’t feel confident with creating sex scenes, so I am glad it was 🔥!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-12-23 00:53:34 +0000 UTCI like the differences in the comics and the original story it spices things up a lot. This chapter was🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Joe Blow78
2023-12-23 00:08:02 +0000 UTCYup! I definitely wanted to make some different choices with the comic, while also keeping some key elements.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-12-22 13:58:04 +0000 UTCa huge departure from the original story!! The maiden has been deflowerd!!
mdaily
2023-12-22 07:24:03 +0000 UTC
