Derideal 19 - 21 (END)
Added 2025-01-10 14:42:56 +0000 UTC"doesn't matter how dark
doesn't matter how many times you fail
never surrender and always be true to yourself"
This is it, everyone.
Thank you for reading Derideal, it took me 18 years to finish the story. but I did, I accomplished it and I don't know exactly what to feel.
when I was writing this episode I cried many times, because it was a way for me to say goodbye, to say sorry to the characters for making them endure this much. It was a very unfair story, but it was always supposed to end like this, with Alpha being stronger than any type of control.
I was sad too, because I know the story is also bittersweet, but I'd say the only character who really had a "win" ending was Ivory?
I want to make a goodbye epilogue for Derideal, but it will be a bonus thing, to wrap things up even more.
but I like this ending, you know that they got a window now to escape, but nothing will ever be the same, Daniel will likely join the rebels and protect the xenos as much as possible.
this was Alpha's final battle, as how I imagine it happen.
I'll wait for any of you interested to join me during this coming Monday 13, at 20hrs (GMT-3. Chilean time) for a little chat when I'm going to discuss my unused ideas for the series, and everything that's supposed to happen in my original concepts, etc.
Comments
No no i understand that the facility was being abadoned, but i'm surprised that at least two guards werent left behind to protect wally at least Sure, the rebels had just attacked the base and they were "eliminated", but there's some serious tech here that must have taken some months to build, if this is still wally personal lab, that must have costed money. which would be probramatic to lose until it could be moved safely Even if they have all wally's blueprints, its still ilogical to build another lab from the ground up without these machines, assuming the lab is abandoned with only wally inside. Hell, he even said with *conviction* "My lab is complete" or something similiar last chapter, which must have taken time
TheNat'LaGuy
2025-01-13 21:16:03 +0000 UTCyeah . the guy's dead. I think read the entire comic on a single or two runs will make it more clear, as everything should flow more easily
Andrés Barra
2025-01-13 16:17:35 +0000 UTCWas wally really the one left in the facility? I have questions for today's chat, and i am making this comment because its been hard to process this entire story
TheNat'LaGuy
2025-01-13 16:09:15 +0000 UTCsee you space cowboy
20 D
2025-01-13 00:56:24 +0000 UTCAlpha goes to retirement
Andrés Barra
2025-01-10 15:58:13 +0000 UTCSo...this is how it ends, and the start of a new beginning.
Shadow
2025-01-10 15:49:25 +0000 UTCI would love that, here's hoping they settle down on a nice farm far away from the consortium and have 12 kittens
Gally
2025-01-10 15:08:54 +0000 UTCthanks! yeah, Ivory is too cute to die anyway
Andrés Barra
2025-01-10 15:03:53 +0000 UTCwell, this is the true ending really. but I hope to make a little more pages when I feel in the mood. I need to let this story rest, it's been too much for me at this point. but I hope to get around making something very short, something that could at least explain what's going to be of them.
Andrés Barra
2025-01-10 15:03:30 +0000 UTCDon't leave us hanging! One more epilogue page set several years later showing where they all ended up. I'm still hoping for the farm
Gally
2025-01-10 14:58:26 +0000 UTCOhhhh the OG story is finished😭😭😭 What a ride. Im happy Ivory also made it out. Thank you for sharing the story Kiaun!
EunosMiata
2025-01-10 14:57:24 +0000 UTC...
Kozaksss
2025-01-10 14:54:06 +0000 UTCI hope everything was worth it
Andrés Barra
2025-01-10 14:50:52 +0000 UTCWhat a ride it was
Tan575
2025-01-10 14:49:18 +0000 UTC
