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Derideal 14-11 WIP+BLOG

I just wanted to make clear certain consequences, and how being "the good guy" can also backfire in this setting... Daniel trusted Alpha a little too much, he allowed him to pick up things and just trusted he will tell him whatever he finds... but ultimatelly he didn't, he didn't informed him of the magazine he found, then the device he stole... and when Ivory gave him the "information" he didn't reported it either... clearly, showing the lack of control Daniel has over the xenos.

the original dialogs of this page were different, and were sort of like this:

- leave everything in my hands, go to the hospital

-I'll tell the director what happened

(rest of dialogs are the same, until the last 3 panels)

- daniel, as your friend, I'd advice you to quit the project

-at least for some time, you got too emotionally involved

- I suppose, this is where my contribution stops...

Berit isn't being mean with Daniel really, even in the new dialogs, but I wanted to make more clear that C.WALLY is still behind most of what's going on... and also made clear it's not finally his choice to leave the project prime, and he's just being forced to.

I also thought it was impossible for C.Wally to ignore this, since Berit already knew... (even if C.WALLY might not be in the same building)

but you can see how progressively he's influence is become stronger, and the story finally going back to part 1... Daniel remembers in the vulnerable episode how he was put "in charge"... but is he really in charge of the xenos? Dr. Berit is also important for the project, and despite she might not be interested in being a caretaker, the XENOS are now trained, they're soldiers, they do missions... and there's always some medical staff besides Daniel.

Derideal 14-11 WIP+BLOG

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They literally were also leaving things undocumented, you can even say they were sabotaging the project more than even Daniel This was staged. They probably had a vage idea or knew that him was allowing certain stuff for Aden, and because our doctor here has a big grudge for both of their projects intertwining, and since he doesn't consider them people, he knows he can have plausible deniability if he plays his cards right I just hope this absolutely backfires straight to his face and gets some good old karma-ish justice

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