Loyal Path script 1-13 /PART 1

Hey! I got this stuff since ages, but since it was in Spanish I didn't had the time to translate.

but I think it's worth to upload and not lost all of this work.

this comic was basically about:

"Li quian and his master Althalos are on a quest to find a way to defeat Barda, the crow wizard king before he attacks the Leontyr kingdom.
Barda knows Althalos is on a quest and will try to stop him, feeling whatever he's up to is dangerous to his plan"

it took me a few months to finish the script for this story, it's based off a set of written in a not "technical" way for comics, but I also decided to improve upon the story, so this would be my "adaptation" based off the scripts I was given.

the drawings will be difficult to undestand sometimes, as these are just sketches I made before the actual job of make final comic pages, but if you pay attention I'm sure you'll be able to follow the story.

this version of the story is an adaptation, but credits due the original person who wrote the concept for it, and come up with  the characters, names, world and etc.

I just took the characters, events and modified, re-arranged them in a way that I felt was working better. but I didn't took many liberties in terms of modifying much the story, I just removed parts, changed interactions and came up with entirely new ones, also tried to give more defined personality to each character.

I also changed the dialogs entirely, so this is sort of "my version" of a story idea created by someone else.

my favorite in the story was the raccoon, well, I'll continue uploading the rest of this story that has 2 episodes, during the following weeks as I find time to quickly translate them.

bottomline, what I learned from this experience, is that if I'm going to do this same job again, I'll modify the story even further.