Derideal 12 - "Vulnerable" cover+page 1
Added 2023-02-03 12:59:26 +0000 UTC"How can I still feel you, if I know that you're not here anymore?
could you ever forgive me for not being capable of being happy?"
This is the beginning of Derideal part 3.
As I mentioned months ago, or a year ago probably, the next stage in Derideal story lacks most color (this was the only way I figured out I could finish the story).
in any case, remember that what happened between Alpha and Ivory is up to you.
when I first made the last scene, what I had in mind was them to just hug and stay together during the night, now with the abetment chapter, I feel any of the two options work, the idea is that Alpha started to care more about her, opened up a little and became... Vulnerable, and well, in more than one way as we'll see in this episode.
ps- page need text revisions!
Ps2. this is the song I got inpiration from for naming this episode https://youtu.be/DQlPJaSDseg
Comments
Getting the feeling that of lot things are going to come together. Not just characters colliding but finding themselves too.
Kit Foxboy
2023-02-03 16:54:04 +0000 UTCAlso, loved the song you got inpiration from π€
TheNat'LaGuy
2023-02-03 15:38:17 +0000 UTCOh my boi, if you remembered Laura and everything that happend before your unquestioned loyalty to oligarchy megacorp you serve, especially after getting "freaky" with Ivory on a certain abetment comic, you would fall into a deep depression But i got faith in you, mah boy. You have a heart of gold with the will to change for the better. Everthing will turn out good in the end for you and your friends. They can take away your memories, but they can't away the light inside your soul, with its memories and truth buried deep with in.
TheNat'LaGuy
2023-02-03 15:28:01 +0000 UTC
