I got to say that I'm not really super informed about politics, military and all type of organization, I'm just going with what feels right for me xd, might be a mistake, but heck, I can't know everything and we all have different interests heh.
still, the main reason I made this comic was because I'm under the impression some readers think of Nova as someone who can't make mistakes, like she's very heroic and all that... but there's just so little about her, that I decided to make a bit of her past, show that she can be considered flawed, impulsive, just like the rest... it's not that she's irresponsible or dumb... she's just young and she's very idealistic, which is part of the reason that lead to her current condition in the prelude, she didn't took the right calls, that time, too, I think (despite how much "intelligent" she actually is -- I got to confess, it's part of how I wanted her to mirror a little Admiral Adama in BSG, who despite being very capable, gets attached and is very emotional under certain conditions)
idk, I hope seeing her like this will make her easier to understand, and complent her character a little more, and you can see how she relate a little better to Bandi, I think we all are kinda contradictory sometimes, and I also wondered if I put Nova in an unfair situation, she would respect laws and common sense, or would she just face danger and consequences?
the neutral grounds are big portions of the planet, it's not super important to never go there, but it's dangerous and if you're an official representative it isn't good for you to don't respect agreements, there are economics and politics interests in keeping the neutral zones protected, and it was require a joint effort back then to ensure cooperation, since all clans cooperate but doesn't really understand well each other haha.
Original
this changed quite a lot, disposition of panels and all that to make better flow, I also thought many panels ruined the composition, and made a better final panel that give much more information.
