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Abetment pg12 - wip+blog (nsfw)

Added 2021-06-30 17:46:22 +0000 UTC

Hey, I just wanted to make something to distract myself, since I've lost practice writing blogs I'm going to write some comments about the newest Derideal Abetment comic (nsfw) for the 5$ tier.

Colored page with dialogs is available here:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/53120980

I made this page first in paper, as most comics I do, it's mostly a free losen style, but I tried this time to get the poses as similar as I wanted to make them rendered.... dialogs are mostly tentative in this stage, since I revise the dialog laters, if any in this care...

to be honest, writing small bits of dialog for this NSFW comics give me lots of doubts, I don't think I'm very good at it.

I decided to make this comic to start slowly and become more and more nsfw as it goes, now we're in the explicit pages, I just thought it was more natural or how I imagined Alpha and Ivory first encounter would be? maybe with some silly fantasies and adding stuff that they probably wouldn't know about considering they don't know anything about sex except their basic impulses, but it's for the sake of Pron! I just tried to draw stuff that I thought it was hot.

I also thought it was fun to Ivory to get a bit surprised the first time she noticed how alpha looked now.

About anatomy used, the only important detail I changed in this comic was giving Alpha genials that look slightly more human. in terms of canon it would make sense... but as I mention, Idk, I just go by how I feel more comfortable at the time, I don't really want to research about different type of genitals anatomy... ugh