Weekly Feedback Post and Scheduling Update
Added 2025-07-27 18:34:17 +0000 UTCGreetings:
Most of you are new here, while some of you have been here for a while. To newcomers, welcome. I hope you're enjoying Deathless. I hope the same for older readers, but this update will go over the state of my older stories as well.
The first item is weekly feedback. It's just a place for you guys to leave comments about what you feel is working or could be improved upon in the writing.
Now, I've already noticed some issues I'm trying to fix. Some inconsistencies and errors in levels. Some awkward dictation jank (the initial drafts for these chapters are dictated, so when you run into something weird, that's not a prompted thing, that's the dictation being messed up and me missing it a bit). Also, the overall flow of the paragraphs. Basically, any kind of feedback you want.
Now, for TTF and Godclads, I'm sorry I haven't been posting as much there. I want to get a bit back on the ball for Godclads first due to how much stuff has been building up there. I will be trying to improve my writing proficiency, and will likely try to deliver on TUES THURS SAT AND SUN at the very least. TTF will remain as is for now.
Deathless will continue posting at its rate for the foreseeable future, but know that I am trying to improve all sections of the process. Anyway, this is just a brief update. Stay tuned for more words.
Comments
Chapter naming is sort of confusing. Ideally the chapters of each of your series would be easier to separate at a glance.
DagNabItAll
2025-07-30 15:41:36 +0000 UTCFYI. Tentacles don't have bones. They are purely muscle. I noticed that you described bones in the tentacles of two creatures: the Jealousy and the Court Leviathan. Unless these creatures have peculiar quirks that require them to have bones in their tentacles. If so, then the tentacle becomes a tail or a hyper-articulated arm.
MrSnap
2025-07-28 20:51:53 +0000 UTC
