
The story is much-improved thanks to Dath's editing, and I can't thank you all enough for reading. Expect improvements in the flow of the text, added scenes, smoothed character moments, and improved and fixed systems bits.
Read/get the existing chapters (3-51) within the next 10 hours, because after that, they're going to be getting a bit... sparse.
Brent Stinebaker
2025-02-21 18:41:35 +0000 UTC