10-16 Interrupted Deception
Added 2023-04-20 19:50:49 +0000 UTC[Redacted for KU book 2 release]
Comments
'Reclaiming the loci and he formerly subverted was a paltry task' I don't think the "and" is necessary. it should be 'Reclaiming the loci he formerly subverted was a paltry task' 'Shards of glass feel, shattering against the enforcers below.' "feel" should be "fell"
BeatleNerd
2023-04-27 15:04:05 +0000 UTC
